I am so new at this but then you have to start somewhere. I took
these two pics today with the intent of seeing movement. I would
not have seen these before I read this thread so I guess I've
achieved something if still at the rookie level. So for what it's
worth..
and here
http://genji.image.pbase.com/u21/reyeslp/upload/13359732.DSC_2431 .
Luis... i appreciate your posting - starting somewhere - thats it
exactly - you show the courage to proceed by taking creative
risks. With a camera we embrace the world, everything is fair game
worth a try. Painters start from scratch painting in shapes and
forms. Over centuries artists have discovered, circles are very
difficult shape to work with. A circle within a rectangle well
thats even more difficult - because it traps movement. A centered
circle in the shape of a hollow pot - way more difficult again-
like a black hole drawing the eye in with no way out, trapping
movement.
Instinctively you have recognized this with the red circular line
around the rim - good spotting. and I think given the diificult
nature of the subject, your first try you've done quite well.
You've have accurately identified many lines of movement. I edited
tighter in in my variation -cutting into the rim at the top crop,
slowing down eye movement , a bit. I labeled the line that goes
directly into the pot #1- and # 2 as the strong circular line
around the rim, reinforced speed with the smooth slope of the chair
arm. These circular movements are problematic, in ways I am unable
to resolve with editing, so I didn't proceed further, than to
identify the two stronger movements, and note their circular
difficulties here.
Now for the good news

you have a wonderful image in your
gallery - birch trees beautifull figure ground relationships,
having both flat and three dimensional movment, in itself an
excellant image, - well realized and very suitable for the theme of
this post # 1346441. I'd like you to look carefully at this image
and then draw lines of movement with that photo, and we could
follow up and work on it together, if its ok with you. My 2 line
variation below;
Http:
www.pbase.com/image/13464411.jpg
Here is an image of mine of pots, and winter sod from my slough
gallery. Have a look at the way the circular issues are handled
with camera perspective, resonance, diagonal and oblong shapes.
Http:
www.pbase.com/image/7900634,jpg
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NRich
http://www.pbase.com/norman
http://www.pbase.com/norman/dsc_f717_expressions