It does look a little "plasticy" but other than that what's not pretty? I think it has somewhat of a painting-like quality to it.
Here's my take:
The highlights are clipped and gray, reducing the contrast to a point where it looks very unnatural. Unnatural can be good and even interesting, but this is not the case here. More specifically, the highlights are so dark here that it really messes with the brain, we expect to see the bright light at the end of the tunnel be... well, bright. When it's roughly the same value as the shadows, it just looks wrong.
The shadows are pushed up too far as well, to the point where the interesting gradiation in the shadows is removed. As a specific example, how the reflections on the road fade into the deep shadows is a lovely detail in the original shot, but the shadows are pushed up so high that it's lost. How the road fades to pure black is a great detail that helps to lead the viewer's eyes to the point of interest as well. The effectiveness of this element is reduced due to the processing.
Essentially, you're trading lighting interest for textural interest, and it's not an effective or worthwhile trade in this case. The processing of highlights and shadows removes much of what was interesting (the contrast between light and dark an the subtleties in the dark ranges), killing the mood and feeling this image originally had.
When it comes to HDR tone-mapping like this, stripping out the lighting detail, so you're left with only color and texture, is a common error that many make when first experimenting with this style of processing. Light and shadow is such an important, fundamental element of a successful image, so it's a shame to see it discarded.
I think I understand what you mean or what you were attempting in terms of a "painting-like" effect. Most good painters certainly know how to manipulate the dynamic range of a scene in their paintings to capture the feel of the light within the limitations of the range of colors that can be produced with oil paints, but this effect is typically much more subtle than what you've done here.
I would guess that if you simply move the highlight and shadow sliders back by about 50%, it would significantly improve the image. Anyway, that is my opinion, no disrespect intended.