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C&C for a newcomer model
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Ed at Ridersite
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Don't know if it's intended, but she's too blue for my taste - it simply looks like the WB is off.
Nice pose & pretty lady though!
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Nice pose & pretty lady though!
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Steve Grodin
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She looks like she has clumps of hair growing on her left arm. I would clone them out.
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AntnioGM
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Even with that hair problem, the blue makes her quite pleasant, at least to me.
A matter of taste. But she's a beautifull girl. I think that she's on a good start.
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A matter of taste. But she's a beautifull girl. I think that she's on a good start.
António
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Luke White
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I aggree with all the comments. I like the blue but I think the white ballance is a little on the cool side
eNo
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The composition and pose are very complementary. I like the soft treatment and the color push toward blue, which brings out the interplay between her beautiful eyes and blouse.
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D80/D90 gallery: http://esfotoclix.com
Photo blog: http://esfotoclix.com/blog1
VicC
Senior Member
It is not good to have all elbows and arms competing with the face. The white balance is off. Her face is photogenic and would make a good portrait. Vic
fyngyrz
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She's got eye makeup for the evening - dramatic, dark and sexy
She's got lipstick like the girl next door - minimizing the lips
She's got a necklace like a grandmother - "clunky" and not feminine at all.
I'd resolve these discords by either lightening up on the eye makeup and completing the "girl next door" feel, or going for a proper evening look with a deep red lipstick (and probably lip-liner as well), while replacing that necklace with something delicate and feminine.
Given the deep blues and the strong vignette, I'd go for the evening look, myself.
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She's got lipstick like the girl next door - minimizing the lips
She's got a necklace like a grandmother - "clunky" and not feminine at all.
I'd resolve these discords by either lightening up on the eye makeup and completing the "girl next door" feel, or going for a proper evening look with a deep red lipstick (and probably lip-liner as well), while replacing that necklace with something delicate and feminine.
Given the deep blues and the strong vignette, I'd go for the evening look, myself.
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barki
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Thx!
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