C&C for a newcomer model

One of her first shootings... What do you think?



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Don't know if it's intended, but she's too blue for my taste - it simply looks like the WB is off.

Nice pose & pretty lady though!
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She looks like she has clumps of hair growing on her left arm. I would clone them out.

Steve
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Even with that hair problem, the blue makes her quite pleasant, at least to me.

A matter of taste. But she's a beautifull girl. I think that she's on a good start.

António
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I aggree with all the comments. I like the blue but I think the white ballance is a little on the cool side

The composition and pose are very complementary. I like the soft treatment and the color push toward blue, which brings out the interplay between her beautiful eyes and blouse.

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It is not good to have all elbows and arms competing with the face. The white balance is off. Her face is photogenic and would make a good portrait. Vic

She's got eye makeup for the evening - dramatic, dark and sexy

She's got lipstick like the girl next door - minimizing the lips

She's got a necklace like a grandmother - "clunky" and not feminine at all.

I'd resolve these discords by either lightening up on the eye makeup and completing the "girl next door" feel, or going for a proper evening look with a deep red lipstick (and probably lip-liner as well), while replacing that necklace with something delicate and feminine.

Given the deep blues and the strong vignette, I'd go for the evening look, myself.

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Thx!
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