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Hi! I’ve just finished my new website (well, some words need to be added...). It’s made with Zenfolio, so I think there’s not much to say about its structure.
But I would really appreciate any feedback, primarily on the photographs.

Do you think it shoud be possible to earn some money from this kind of landscape work?
Thanks a lot. Andrea

http://www.andreafilippini.com/
 
A little slow. I don't understand the appeal of your first few images. Who would want to buy them?
 
In my opinion.... most landscape shots that I have been most impressed with are those that show a place I would like to be at right now if I could. Your images while quite nice, do not impact me in that way. Some of your shots look like you pulled off the side of the road and took a picture which kind of removes the mystery of the landscape if you know what I mean.

The first handful of shots are more "industrial landscape" shots. I am not saying you couldn't sell your pictures... I just think you will be trying to appeal to a very unique customer base. Also right now there is really nothing on your website that indicates that you want to sell your pictures!

John
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it is utter crap

now that i have your attention, this is what is wrong with it

it opens blank, there is nothing there.

then there is a long wait while the flash thingie loads.

have you ever been to a shop where they first blindfold you, ignore you for a while, then take it off and go "TADAAA!" ? No.

Put something interesting in front of it and provide a way to skip it, put your contact info all over the place, dont make it so hard for your customers to contact you, i coudnt get to your number right away for instance, just a mail form.

Do not make the mistake of thinking what you have here is good, it isnt. Dont make it so hard on your clients, show em the goods right away.

ps - this is advice from a pro in this field. Do with it what you like. Harsh but honest.
 
Not sure the photographs appeal as 'saleable' shots, some are nice but they don't exactly stand out from the crowd.

On your web layout I found it quite disorientating that the menu goes from vertical on the right of the home page to a horizontal nav bar along the top.

Making money from sales of landscape shots is probably one of the hardest things to do, so your product and shopfront need to be outstanding. I'm afraid I don't think yours are quite right at the moment.

Hope this helps

Cheers

Chris
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I won't be so harsh. I think you are on the right track as a field industrial photographer. The images do need more contrast and snap. I don't see average people wanting these images on their wall. Perhaps in the lobbies of mega corporations. Is this who you want to sell to? You do need to splash your phone number on all pages.
 
I think many of photos are very nice, and I'm especially fond of industrial photographs. The night photos are appealing also. If you are trying to sell landscape photos (prints?) then you are in a very competitive market, with many outstanding artists producing many amazing landscape images. The bar is very high.

BTW, I'm not sure this forum is the best place to get much meaningful feedback on your work. I recommend photo.net and dpchallenge as places to get a lot of unbiased feedback, constructive criticism and advice.

Your web site design is fine, but you should complete it, or at least remove the sections that are still under construction (same as to your blog). You may want to reconsider the organization of your portfolio (work in progress, previous work, recently added). The current structure would be good for if you were a renowned artist that people wanted to follow. Otherwise, as a potential client, I would be looking for categories such as industrial, architecture, landscape, night shots, so that I could easily find images that I am interested in.

IMHO, of course.

I hope this helps.

Alan
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I lurk here now and again usually whenever a new camera is released but almost never in threads like this.....

Your images are VERY good and honestly are some of the better contemporary landscape photographs I've seen in a while. Many remind me of Christian Chaize's work.

You're not going to get much useful feedback here in DPReview as most people in this forum are not working photographers let alone working fine art photographers.

My opinion:
  • You need to organize your photos in to coherent groups or "series." This will strengthen your overall presentation. Your "Channel" and "Russia" series are very strong as a collective work.
  • Find a good editor (NOT a friend or people on internet forums) and let them do a no holds barred ruthless edit of your work. You've got some real gems in there surrounded by plenty of duds. Get rid of the duds.
  • Invest some time an a little more money and get a real website. Zenfolio and Smugmug etc all suck. There are other simple, free templates available that are more geared towards the display of fine art work. Indexhibit is a good example.
How much are you selling prints for? I might be interested...
 
Your images are VERY good and honestly are some of the better contemporary landscape photographs I've seen in a while. Many remind me of Christian Chaize's work.
actually, they remind me a bit more about Massimo Vitali: http://www.massimovitali.com/
You're not going to get much useful feedback here in DPReview as most people in this forum are not working photographers let alone working fine art photographers.
yes, unfortunately true
My opinion:
  • You need to organize your photos in to coherent groups or "series." This will strengthen your overall presentation. Your "Channel" and "Russia" series are very strong as a collective work.
agree
  • Find a good editor (NOT a friend or people on internet forums) and let them do a no holds barred ruthless edit of your work. You've got some real gems in there surrounded by plenty of duds. Get rid of the duds.
agree
  • Invest some time an a little more money and get a real website. Zenfolio and Smugmug etc all suck. There are other simple, free templates available that are more geared towards the display of fine art work. Indexhibit is a good example.
out of the many samples I have seen lately, this website sucks the least out of all zenfolio examples... but still the purpose of the website isn't clear: is this fine art, is it industrial/commercial photography, is it stock photography?
How much are you selling prints for? I might be interested...
30x20in prints cost only $95... why???

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Thanks for all of your replies!

1. About the site.

The opening slideshow: I knew it was a bit slow to download, but not so slow to fall asleep even connecting to the web via my cell phone. (Probably you won’t believe it, but this is the way I built the entire site, and the way I’m writing to you now...). I really thought that usual, and much faster connections, would not have any problem with it. Evidently I was wrong! Sorry (but sure you’ve already understand that I’m not so confident with that stuff, which probably explains many other flaws on the site side. Thanks for inputs)

Now I’ve halved the number of images on the slideshow. Hope this helps. It helps?

Alignment of the home page menu: Yes, I know it’s not an elegant solution having to change from vertical to horizontal menu viewing when you leave homepage. I’ve checked right now again on zenfolio but it seems there’s no way to have a horizontal homepage menu that can hold more than five or six links.

To try to give an answer to other site-related questions I think I have to spend some words about my photography (simply because these questions are strictly related to it).

Sorry, perhaps it would have been better to say something more about my thoughts on photography in the opening post, just to try to reduce misunderstanding.

2. Photography

I’m not sure but I think that the word “landscape” taken alone has a someway different meaning than when the same word is coupled with “photography”.

When I think about “landscape” (or “paesaggio” in my language) I’m meaning almost everything, nature or man made, it’s on the earth surface and has a dimension that cannot qualify it as a “detail” of the environment itself (ok, more or less!)

Attach “landscape” to “photography” and immediately “landscape” becomes a much more restrictive term: my sensation is that “landscape photography” today means, before all, astounding natural sceneries.

Perhaps, as suggested by aaron2005 (thanks really a lot for your words!), “contemporary landscape” is a tag that identifies better this kind of landscape photography.

Many times photography has to be recognised under a definition, under a name, to be seen, and surely I underestimate this fact: it’s someway like when we bring to mouth a glass full of what we expect to be Coke, but... Oh my god, what’s this? It’s horrible! It’s sh*t!

No, it was only coffee. But we, expecting coke, didn’t recognise nor accept it at all...

This to say that, when we talk about landscape photography, most of the people expect to see absolutely astounding images of natural scenery.

I completely understand it, but sorry, I’m simply not interested in producing the zillionth cliche of a red rock arch under a red light. Or the billionth long-exposured-silk-like-waters-among-shore-rocks-under-an-end-of-the-world-violet-sky.
And the main reason is: our world is not like this.

I try to point my interest to places, to real and common places, and try to describe them even if they have poor photographic appeal. Even if there’s nothing exceptional around. I want to try to work on them, try to narrate their minimal stories, knowing it’s often a nightmare to find something to photograph, and that the results can be really frustrating. Even the best results I can achieve are often nothing to eyes looking for “astounding” sceneries.

That’s also the reason why I work on a place (a road, a coastal line) trying to collect a little serie of images of that place. Possibly the best I’m able to put together. Single images are good for the Tour Eiffel or the Statue of Liberty, rarely for talking about a place.

I know, it’s a huge problem: how can we photograph the 99% of places on earth that are far from being astonishing?

I think the only possible solution involves not only the photographer skills but also the viewer eyes. Both need to have sincere interest and curiosity on places themselves instead of looking always for the fantasticly oversaturated bidimensional images some places can produce. Vast majority of places simply can’t give you this.

It’s the simple interest at how places ‘round our world are that gives their images dignity.

I’ll go further: I think that keeping on photographing always the same landscape cliches, always searching for what is cool, looking for the exceptional, without any interest for the subject matter apart its potential to deliver an astonishing colored surface, well, this is simply killing photography (or at least what I loved of it).

I'm just trying!
Thanks again for your patience
Andrea
 
I re-checked it, now the first page takes 7-9 secs depending on which browser you use. I tried in chrome and ie8.

if you can put a preloader in there.

Have you decided yet who your intended audience is? I wasnt able to determine this from the front page. People are very fast : open site, look, move on. You only have that short chance to captivate their imagination/catch their attention.

have a look here http://www.awesomelife.com/business/internetmarketing/a01-10-worst-website-mistakes.htm and at similar sites to get an idear of what can be a problem, then make sure youre not making the same mistakes.

but most importantly read, then re-read this site http://www.webpagesthatsuck.com/ then go fix yours. You are breaking quite a couple here ;-)

Hope this helps!
 
This is not the place to ask for advice/opinions. You are asking and taking advice from complete strangers.

You may have some talent and confidence which is great but its not really showing on your website.

The photos lack any kind of structure/organization and they are shot/printed too bright.

Go out and take a lot more photographs. Stick with it. Learn what you can on the web which is a lot but ask advice from those whom you respect.

Steve
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Hi! I’ve just finished my new website (well, some words need to be added...). It’s made with Zenfolio, so I think there’s not much to say about its structure.
But I would really appreciate any feedback, primarily on the photographs.

Do you think it shoud be possible to earn some money from this kind of landscape work?
Thanks a lot. Andrea

http://www.andreafilippini.com/
I like the night shot in the flash mode. Art will always be in the eye of the beholder, for each genre, you will find one who loves a certain work and then the opposite. keep doing what you feel.

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