Black & White C&C

[photo c]

Hello ,would like for you to take look at these shots and tell me what you think about them.
thank you for your time....

http://www.flickr.com/photos/14080758@N02/3200021445/sizes/l/in/photostream/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/14080758@N02/3200124900/sizes/l/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/14080758@N02/3200124886/sizes/l/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/14080758@N02/3199333915/sizes/l/in/photostream/
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[nearly-an-old-codger]

I dont know enough yet to offer technical advice but I will say the white sweater in photo one is very distracting. A darker garment, imho, would be better.

Brian

 

[stratcat55]

The sweater in the first shot is seriously blown out.

 

[seastheday]

Nice face but the sweater is blown out. My guess is he is very dark skinned and there is to much dynamic range from his sweater to his skin. The uplighting is unflattering in two and four. A hair light is needed. The young girl lighting is flat. Both female's lipstick is distracting (dark ring).

 

[Aileen S]

I think number three is particularly lovely.

Keep shooting.

AS