New shots attampts - "C & C please"

bbarclay

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1st one some pre-process







Please your comments and suggestions

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I like this cat shot a lot, and as for the first three. Number one is either over processed or the lighting is very bad as it is way to harsh. Number two would be better if you used a bounce flash so you don't get shadows behind the subjects, and Number there is terrific. Dave
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Love the first three.
I comp is everything. So practice on 4.
Or just do like 1-3. :-).

Alex
 
This are nice shots and you should consider taking your photography to the next level!

If you don't have a flashgun, then get one as soon as you can. It will transform your indoor flash shots. You can angle the flashhead and "bounce" the light, off a neutral coloured wall or ceiling, or even from a reflector. Or a white sheet.

Shot no. 1, very pretty girl... lighting a little harsh. Watch the highlights don't burn out. Reduce power of the flash and/or add a little negative exposure compensation. Minor niggle, you have "chopped" the end of her plait.

No. 2, nice group shot, I like the little girl's expression on the left! but the background shadows are quite harsh. This is where a flashgun would help. Try not to chop off hands. Consider arranging the girls so that they are not all facing the camera straight on. Have them move away from the background if you can as the background is too sharp.

No. 3. Nice shot of this pretty girl! I like the diffused background and the angle of the girl to the camera.

These are only my opinions but maybe will give you things to think about, you may not agree!

Kind regards
Julia
 
Hi David,

Thank you very much for your looking, comments and suggestions.

I am happy because I learned from these comments and suggestions.

Best regards

EOS 350D
canon EF-S 18-55mm Kit lens
Helios 58mm/f2 manual focus lens
 
Hello Julia

First of all i hope you can understanding my broken English language.

I am very happy for your kind comments and perfect suggestions
I accept all your comments because they teach me.

your opinions give me many things to think about.

Thnak you very much
Best regards

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canon EF-S 18-55mm Kit lens
Helios 58mm/f2 manual focus lens
 

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