Brenda C&C one swimwear shot

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Well here is a recent shoot that I had. This was like her first time to model. She had alot of fun and I am still learning.







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Canon 20D
Canon Speedlite 580ex
Sigma 24-70mm F2.8 EX aspherical DG DF
Sigma 70-200mm F2.8 EX APO IF HSM
 
First one's the best, but I think you already know that.

2nd pic: this model isn't confident enough to face the camera fully and get a good shot. She looks confused. Also, your focal length is too short. what was it? 50mm? Her feet are too small compared to the rest of her.

3rd pic: awkward angle. when you shoot her like this, take 50 frames with her in all different positions, and she'll be able to see what looks best so she'll know next time how to position herself. focal length introducing some distortion, and her top is blown out; no detail in the white.

but good for a first attempt.
 
Yes it was shot on a white paper background.
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Canon 20D
Canon Speedlite 580ex
Sigma 24-70mm F2.8 EX aspherical DG DF
Sigma 70-200mm F2.8 EX APO IF HSM
 
First one's the best, but I think you already know that.
Yes one of my favorite.
2nd pic: this model isn't confident enough to face the camera fully
and get a good shot. She looks confused. Also, your focal length is
too short. what was it? 50mm? Her feet are too small compared to
the rest of her.
This one camera settings was F 14.0 Shutter 1/30 ISO 200 and Focal Length 26mm. I really dont see where the feet are smaller in this one.
3rd pic: awkward angle. when you shoot her like this, take 50
frames with her in all different positions, and she'll be able to
see what looks best so she'll know next time how to position
herself. focal length introducing some distortion, and her top is
blown out; no detail in the white.
I knew this was a little different angle but wanted to do something a little different. Can you elaborate on the distortion? I do not see it. I do see the blown out white on her top I should be able to fix that. I just added a little too much to it in photoshop.
but good for a first attempt.
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Canon 20D
Canon Speedlite 580ex
Sigma 24-70mm F2.8 EX aspherical DG DF
Sigma 70-200mm F2.8 EX APO IF HSM
 
This one camera settings was F 14.0 Shutter 1/30 ISO 200 and Focal
Length 26mm. I really dont see where the feet are smaller in this
one.
at shorter focal lengths, you get exaggeration of features. Things that are closer to the camera seem much much larger.

My foot is just over one handspan, from pinky to thumb, meaning that my foot is barely longer than my face is tall. that's probably fairly normal. but when I look at this model's feet, they look like they'd only go from her chin to her eyebrow. They're farther away, so they seem much smaller than they are.

The minimum focal length for portraiture should be around 80mm, and lots of portraits and fashion are shot with 135mm or greater.
I knew this was a little different angle but wanted to do something
a little different. Can you elaborate on the distortion? I do not
see it.
Look at her forward arm. her wrist should be no smaller than half the width of her shoulder, or thereabouts, but it appears to be 1/5th the width. that's because the shoulder was close and the wrist was far, and that kind of thing is greatlt exaggerated with short focal lengths.

Check out these 2 pics of a truck, one at 24mm and one at 80mm.





See how far away the barn looks and how elongated the truck looks in the 24mm shot? it's all stretched out. These pics are from http://www.kevinwilley.com/l3_topic04.htm used without permission (sorry, kevin!)

Longer focal lengths are considered more flattering because they don't exaggerate things like big noses, etc, and body parts end up apperaing to be the right size.
I do see the blown out white on her top I should be able to
fix that. I just added a little too much to it in photoshop.
ok, as long as it wasn't shot that bright, you might be able to fix it. if it came out of the camera like that, it would be sad face time.

One other thing, you said that you shot at f/14, iso 200... From what I've heard, read, and seen, you get a decrease of sharpness when your aperture becomes tiny. for the Canon 5D, it doesn't pay to go over f/13 because the light behaves weird any tighter than that. It's called diffraction and it has to do with the fact that the wavelengths of light affect where the photons hit, iirc.

SO, you could have shot f/11 at iso 100 for the same exposure, and you might have had a slightly sharper image (but don't go to f/4 because you'll lose some DOF.
AND, it varies for each camera. isn't that wonderful?
 
Thanks thatwas alot of useful information. I know I should use a larger focal length but I really can't do it on a full body shot in my 18ft room with the model 6 to 8 ft from the wall. So only give me like 10ft. I can for like head and upper torso shots. So I use my smaller lens.

Also I read somewhere that the ISO of 200 on a 20D had a better dynamic range. So I started shooting with that. I know around and f8 is about the sharpest for my lens. I just wanted to get the most depth of feild. I had problems when I shot a faily the front row would be in focus but the back row would be a little bit blurry. So I moved up from my f8 and went a little bit higher. Just to stay on the safe side. But thatk you very much for going indept and adding the examples.
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Canon 20D
Canon Speedlite 580ex
Sigma 24-70mm F2.8 EX aspherical DG DF
Sigma 70-200mm F2.8 EX APO IF HSM
 
my pleasure. you seem like you really research your options and know your equipment well.

10 feet from the model should give you a decent full-body shot at 50mm... you could back into a corner for 85mm maybe (i usually have to step outside the room for 85mm shots.

Good luck, good work,a nd I look forward to seeing your future attempts.
 

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