Does it suck? Well, that's a little harsh, I think, but there are a few problems with shot...
First off, the photo is compositionally ambiguous. There are several things just sort of lurking near the left-center, namely, a carved or molded plaster/marble/whatever thingy, a colored concrete brick, and a shell, none of which has anything to do with any of the other things, all sort of randomly stuck on a disparate background consisting of pine needles and other organic detritus. None of the elements are similar enough to each other to create a theme, nor are they different enough (even metaphorically) to make a statement, at least no statement I can see.
Secondly, the exposure isn't handled very well. I would have checked the exposure post-shot, particularly the histogram, and would have noticed the blown-out hightlights on the shell, blowouts which have no artistic or compositional purpose that I can see. To ameliorate this reflection, you could have tried a polarizer to mask the specular reflection coming off the shell, or you could have set your exposure compensation to about 1 or 1.3EV, spot-metered off the bright part of the shell, set flash compensation to -2EV or so and tried a fill-flash shot. A reflector of some sort directed to the dark areas might have been better, though, or a diffuser to soften the hightly-directional incoming light.
Had I been out walking and encoutered these things, I might have snapped off a shot, too, but I don't really see a lot here worth playing around with to make a print worthwhile.
Almsot a 100% crop from the E330.