The second one is also nice. Love the muted colors and the
composition, both with spaces and colors, as well as the
juxtaposition with the car and the cross.
I like the idea in #3, I like the lines and forms, and the repeat
of the two magazines, but I'm not sure if I think it works as well
as, say, #1. I like it, but maybe a slightly different
framing/composition (closer/further away) would've helped? I don't
know, I can't explain - it's just that I like it, but at the same
time there's something that doesn't quite come together. (Did that
make sense at all, lol?)
I like the idea of #4 too, and it has a little Martin Parr to it.
The "sick" WB fits the image just fine, but I just feel the image
lacks a point of interest, or that the pieces of meat don't quite
come together in a pattern, the eye doesn't have anywhere to rest.
I also think the distorted line at the bottom is a little
disturbing to a shot with a strict composition like this (what lens
did you use?). I still like it, but this one also has "something"
lacking to make it really good, IMO.
The first one is definitely a keeper in my eyes, and the second is
great. The last two are very interesting, and inspirering. Thanks
for sharing!
Oh, and congrats on your new cam!
Thomas.
PS. For your style, I thought you might like to have a look at
these threads, and the discussions there. I found them very
interesting:
Dirty, pretty things:
http://forums.dpreview.com/forums/read.asp?forum=1034&message=12401741
Operation ivy:
http://forums.dpreview.com/forums/read.asp?forum=1034&message=12488558
Frame division:
http://forums.dpreview.com/forums/read.asp?forum=1034&message=12502111
Hi all!
I finaly received my D2H this morning...so I charged the battery
and went out for a walk... Man! this camera is awesome!
Here are some of my "keepers of the day". Are these keepers only
for me coz I am biased? (I am in love with this camera)
FEEDBACK WELCOME
number 1:
number 2:
number 3:
number 4:
Cheers!
Julien