3 Pics from my latest Shooting







On the First and second image ive used a Boomstand with smal
45xmx45cm softbox from above and one spot on her face...i love this
effect :-) waht do you think?

regards Janosch
http://www.jsfotografie.de
Hi Janosch,

I like the lighting in all three images, but do not care for the poses in the #1 and #2. I love #3! Beautiful girl!

Thanks for sharing!

Rodney
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I don;t know what it is but it seems like you are almost "there". You have a beautiful girl and some very cool lighting technique, but it needs something else. Maybe you have it in the rest of the shots.

IMO the pose in #1 is too uncomfortable looking, #2 is 'ok' but what's with the hands in the hair? and in #3 make a choice, are you shooting her face or her shoulder or her chest., pick one.

Did you use a make up or hair stylist?

M
 
as i said this was a light play try :-)

no jessy styled her self! we wanted to go to an make up artist but none was free at the time we shoot yesterday...but i think jessy did a pretty good job! :-)

regards Janosch
I don;t know what it is but it seems like you are almost "there".
You have a beautiful girl and some very cool lighting technique,
but it needs something else. Maybe you have it in the rest of the
shots.

IMO the pose in #1 is too uncomfortable looking, #2 is 'ok' but
what's with the hands in the hair? and in #3 make a choice, are you
shooting her face or her shoulder or her chest., pick one.

Did you use a make up or hair stylist?

M
 
BUT I dont beleive you for a SECOND about the eyes.

Look at the SHAPE of them. I dont know about catchlight removal, my guess in color enhancement from repainting over them, but you have completely altered the shaped of both the RETINAs and the PUPILs.
Gorgeous photos, just clean up that PS technique.



Then again, you said "there is NO PS editing in the eys!"

"PS" includes PSP or any other editing software you use.

Nice stuff, though.

-GageFX
It's so obvious that you used photoshop to remove the catchlights.
That's a mistake - you have to design light in a way that you won't
have to photoshop that much.

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http://s87486672.onlinehome.us
 
I dont agree much with the others. I like the poses.Wow what a beautiful girl. Red hair,blue eyes.......nice body......I have now had my sweets after super......hehehehe






On the First and second image ive used a Boomstand with smal
45xmx45cm softbox from above and one spot on her face...i love this
effect :-) waht do you think?

regards Janosch
http://www.jsfotografie.de
 


aso you can see there is NO PS :-) OK OK i should have removed MY shadow! because thats what you see as i stand above her on a chair in front of my 1,2M ocotobox..i didnt realized that this will be visible :-)

her is a slightly corretect version




Then again, you said "there is NO PS editing in the eys!"

"PS" includes PSP or any other editing software you use.

Nice stuff, though.

-GageFX
It's so obvious that you used photoshop to remove the catchlights.
That's a mistake - you have to design light in a way that you won't
have to photoshop that much.

---------------
http://s87486672.onlinehome.us
 


aso you can see there is NO PS :-) OK OK i should have removed MY
shadow! because thats what you see as i stand above her on a chair
in front of my 1,2M ocotobox..i didnt realized that this will be
visible :-)

her is a slightly corretect version




Then again, you said "there is NO PS editing in the eys!"

"PS" includes PSP or any other editing software you use.

Nice stuff, though.

-GageFX
It's so obvious that you used photoshop to remove the catchlights.
That's a mistake - you have to design light in a way that you won't
have to photoshop that much.

---------------
http://s87486672.onlinehome.us
The eyes never looked photo shopped to me. I hate to see lots of PS work , especially on the eyes. Interestingly, when you get it right, everyone think you used Photo Shop. Again, great job!

Rodney

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And those eyes look NATURAL to you? No point in me arguing because nothing can be proven, but I see nothing natural there.

No biggie. Great shots anyway. And I have no prob w/ you reflection in the eyes. You were there. It's to be expected.

-GageFX
The eyes never looked photo shopped to me. I hate to see lots of
PS work , especially on the eyes. Interestingly, when you get it
right, everyone think you used Photo Shop. Again, great job!

Rodney


aso you can see there is NO PS :-) OK OK i should have removed MY
shadow! because thats what you see as i stand above her on a chair
in front of my 1,2M ocotobox..i didnt realized that this will be
visible :-)
 
do you mind briefly telling me about the source(s) of light and set-up that you are using??
 
No biggie. Great shots anyway. And I have no prob w/ you reflection
in the eyes. You were there. It's to be expected.

-GageFX
The eyes never looked photo shopped to me. I hate to see lots of
PS work , especially on the eyes. Interestingly, when you get it
right, everyone think you used Photo Shop. Again, great job!

Rodney


aso you can see there is NO PS :-) OK OK i should have removed MY
shadow! because thats what you see as i stand above her on a chair
in front of my 1,2M ocotobox..i didnt realized that this will be
visible :-)
Don't get all bent out of shape over it! What I see is an image that is way too sharp for my taste, but do not see any selective fix-up on the eyes. My mother had very bright blue eyes that looked amost unnatural and I have a friend who has very similar eyes.

Rodney
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a fixation on your mother's eyes - very Freudian ;-)))
 
Here, here, #3 is awsome man, nice job.






On the First and second image ive used a Boomstand with smal
45xmx45cm softbox from above and one spot on her face...i love this
effect :-) waht do you think?

regards Janosch
http://www.jsfotografie.de
Hi Janosch,

I like the lighting in all three images, but do not care for the
poses in the #1 and #2. I love #3! Beautiful girl!

Thanks for sharing!

Rodney
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If you look at the lower right of the iris, might that be a hint of the natural grey/blue eye color? That's what it looks like to me, but I could be wrong...

Nice work!

Shannon (who wears colored contacts...)
 

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