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I finally got a backdrop and put it to use tonight using practice shots. I took several shots. One was 1/125 at f/8 and one that was 1/125 f/16 of which is the one I am posting in here. I wanted to share this one.

Nevermind the wrinkles or pose. I will work on those later.

Melissa



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Hi Melissa,

It bothers me that you will not get a little more serious about what you are doing. Your image here isn't great and it isn't horrible either. Ok, I'm being kind.

I like your backdrop. If you'll practice working with it, you'll enjoy it.

Why did you take a shot at F/8 and another at f/16?

Shutter speed doesn't matter as long as you do not exceet your max sync speed which I believe is 1/125 on the S2 and do not go low enough that ambient light affects the exposure.

If you really want to learn to use your equipment in a studio type lighting environment, hear what I'm saying here and people will jump in to help you out.

Forget Photo Shop!
Forget in-camera High Sharpening level! Set it to the lowest.

Forget RAW files! You are way too unexperienced to attempt adjusting RAW files! The S2 takes great JPG images that require little or no post-processing.

Now that we understand what you should forget, let's go to the next step. Work with one(1) subject until you get the feel for what you are doing. Take one child and make certain his or her face is freshly washed...don't try to remove cookie dough with Photo Shop!

Your child is now all cleaned up and ready to have his/her portrait taken. Pose your subject where he will be and get a meter reading for your exposure. Tell him not to move. Walk back to your camera, set the f/stop, look in the viewfinder and make adjustments to camera height and angle and take the picture. Come back and post the image at preferrably 600x400 pixels. Size, but don't crop!

After you post your image, others will make suggestions on how to proceed and hopfully you will get a better understand how aperture affects your image along the way. No one here cares if your background is wrinkled...Get the exposure right and then you can worry with fine details.

If you will do as everyone has suggested to you in the past, you'll find it is rather easy to understand the basics wich you do not understand today.

Good luck,
Rodney
I finally got a backdrop and put it to use tonight using practice
shots. I took several shots. One was 1/125 at f/8 and one that was
1/125 f/16 of which is the one I am posting in here. I wanted to
share this one.

Nevermind the wrinkles or pose. I will work on those later.

Melissa



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Forget using one of your lights. Goto Staples and get you a sheet of foam board to use as a reflector if you do not already have a reflector. You'll find that this will help you more than anything you can do. I know I did.

Good luck,
Rodney
It bothers me that you will not get a little more serious about
what you are doing. Your image here isn't great and it isn't
horrible either. Ok, I'm being kind.

I like your backdrop. If you'll practice working with it, you'll
enjoy it.

Why did you take a shot at F/8 and another at f/16?

Shutter speed doesn't matter as long as you do not exceet your max
sync speed which I believe is 1/125 on the S2 and do not go low
enough that ambient light affects the exposure.

If you really want to learn to use your equipment in a studio type
lighting environment, hear what I'm saying here and people will
jump in to help you out.

Forget Photo Shop!
Forget in-camera High Sharpening level! Set it to the lowest.
Forget RAW files! You are way too unexperienced to attempt
adjusting RAW files! The S2 takes great JPG images that require
little or no post-processing.

Now that we understand what you should forget, let's go to the next
step. Work with one(1) subject until you get the feel for what you
are doing. Take one child and make certain his or her face is
freshly washed...don't try to remove cookie dough with Photo Shop!

Your child is now all cleaned up and ready to have his/her portrait
taken. Pose your subject where he will be and get a meter reading
for your exposure. Tell him not to move. Walk back to your
camera, set the f/stop, look in the viewfinder and make adjustments
to camera height and angle and take the picture. Come back and
post the image at preferrably 600x400 pixels. Size, but don't crop!

After you post your image, others will make suggestions on how to
proceed and hopfully you will get a better understand how aperture
affects your image along the way. No one here cares if your
background is wrinkled...Get the exposure right and then you can
worry with fine details.

If you will do as everyone has suggested to you in the past, you'll
find it is rather easy to understand the basics wich you do not
understand today.

Good luck,
Rodney
I finally got a backdrop and put it to use tonight using practice
shots. I took several shots. One was 1/125 at f/8 and one that was
1/125 f/16 of which is the one I am posting in here. I wanted to
share this one.

Nevermind the wrinkles or pose. I will work on those later.

Melissa



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First of all Rodney, thanks for responding. Second of all, I used both of the f/stops because they are what the light meter gave me them. This one that I posted is similar, notice I said similar, to the ones pjiltz posts. I like that look of low key photographing. As for PS, I did not do anything except crop this photo and what is so bad about cropping a picture? Nothing in my eyes. As for posing, I'm worried about that right now. I'm working on getting an exposure I like.

I need to get to my photogrpaphy club meeeting where I can also get some pros answers too.

Thank you...Melissa
Good luck,
Rodney
It bothers me that you will not get a little more serious about
what you are doing. Your image here isn't great and it isn't
horrible either. Ok, I'm being kind.

I like your backdrop. If you'll practice working with it, you'll
enjoy it.

Why did you take a shot at F/8 and another at f/16?

Shutter speed doesn't matter as long as you do not exceet your max
sync speed which I believe is 1/125 on the S2 and do not go low
enough that ambient light affects the exposure.

If you really want to learn to use your equipment in a studio type
lighting environment, hear what I'm saying here and people will
jump in to help you out.

Forget Photo Shop!
Forget in-camera High Sharpening level! Set it to the lowest.
Forget RAW files! You are way too unexperienced to attempt
adjusting RAW files! The S2 takes great JPG images that require
little or no post-processing.

Now that we understand what you should forget, let's go to the next
step. Work with one(1) subject until you get the feel for what you
are doing. Take one child and make certain his or her face is
freshly washed...don't try to remove cookie dough with Photo Shop!

Your child is now all cleaned up and ready to have his/her portrait
taken. Pose your subject where he will be and get a meter reading
for your exposure. Tell him not to move. Walk back to your
camera, set the f/stop, look in the viewfinder and make adjustments
to camera height and angle and take the picture. Come back and
post the image at preferrably 600x400 pixels. Size, but don't crop!

After you post your image, others will make suggestions on how to
proceed and hopfully you will get a better understand how aperture
affects your image along the way. No one here cares if your
background is wrinkled...Get the exposure right and then you can
worry with fine details.

If you will do as everyone has suggested to you in the past, you'll
find it is rather easy to understand the basics wich you do not
understand today.

Good luck,
Rodney
I finally got a backdrop and put it to use tonight using practice
shots. I took several shots. One was 1/125 at f/8 and one that was
1/125 f/16 of which is the one I am posting in here. I wanted to
share this one.

Nevermind the wrinkles or pose. I will work on those later.

Melissa



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Hi Melissa,

I’m not condemning your work here. It could have been one of those priceless moments if you had taken the time to get suitable clothing and cleaned up the boys face just a little.

I still do not understand why you have two meter readings.

Cropping is ok after you get the hang of framing the image in your viewfinder. If you expect people here to be able to help you, you need to post the images as close to what you get straight out of the camera.

PhotoShop is a great tool, but you gotta have something to work with first. Again, you need to show here what you originally have straight out of camera so they can help you. This particular image looks very “fixed-up” to me on my monitor. Maybe it has this look because it is so small.

No one here wants to see you put out fabulous images more than I do...I think I’ve proved that to you. I swore I’d never post a self-portrait and ask for help, but I ended up doing it mainly so you could see how to get others to help you on this forum. Follow the threads and see what I started out with and when instructions were provided, I went back and did it again. I didn’t end up with professional quality images, but I did learn something and I did improve and you can follow the progress.

There is another here who is doing about the same as you. He posts an image asking for help and gets good advice, but does nothing with it. He’ll come back and post a similar image and you can see that he tried nothing that was previously suggested.

Melissa, you have two simple choices here. 1. Do as everyone has been suggesting and watch yourself evolve into a good photographer. 2. Keep explaining why you are or aren’t doing what is suggested and continue to be a snap shooter with lots of fancy equipment. It is your choice to make. I’m sorry to be so blunt, but that is the simplicity of it.

Good luck,
Rodney
I need to get to my photogrpaphy club meeeting where I can also get
some pros answers too.

Thank you...Melissa
Good luck,
Rodney
It bothers me that you will not get a little more serious about
what you are doing. Your image here isn't great and it isn't
horrible either. Ok, I'm being kind.

I like your backdrop. If you'll practice working with it, you'll
enjoy it.

Why did you take a shot at F/8 and another at f/16?

Shutter speed doesn't matter as long as you do not exceet your max
sync speed which I believe is 1/125 on the S2 and do not go low
enough that ambient light affects the exposure.

If you really want to learn to use your equipment in a studio type
lighting environment, hear what I'm saying here and people will
jump in to help you out.

Forget Photo Shop!
Forget in-camera High Sharpening level! Set it to the lowest.
Forget RAW files! You are way too unexperienced to attempt
adjusting RAW files! The S2 takes great JPG images that require
little or no post-processing.

Now that we understand what you should forget, let's go to the next
step. Work with one(1) subject until you get the feel for what you
are doing. Take one child and make certain his or her face is
freshly washed...don't try to remove cookie dough with Photo Shop!

Your child is now all cleaned up and ready to have his/her portrait
taken. Pose your subject where he will be and get a meter reading
for your exposure. Tell him not to move. Walk back to your
camera, set the f/stop, look in the viewfinder and make adjustments
to camera height and angle and take the picture. Come back and
post the image at preferrably 600x400 pixels. Size, but don't crop!

After you post your image, others will make suggestions on how to
proceed and hopfully you will get a better understand how aperture
affects your image along the way. No one here cares if your
background is wrinkled...Get the exposure right and then you can
worry with fine details.

If you will do as everyone has suggested to you in the past, you'll
find it is rather easy to understand the basics wich you do not
understand today.

Good luck,
Rodney
I finally got a backdrop and put it to use tonight using practice
shots. I took several shots. One was 1/125 at f/8 and one that was
1/125 f/16 of which is the one I am posting in here. I wanted to
share this one.

Nevermind the wrinkles or pose. I will work on those later.

Melissa



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Hi Melissa,

I’m not condemning your work here. It could have been one of those
priceless moments if you had taken the time to get suitable
clothing and cleaned up the boys face just a little.

I still do not understand why you have two meter readings.

Cropping is ok after you get the hang of framing the image in your
viewfinder. If you expect people here to be able to help you, you
need to post the images as close to what you get straight out of
the camera.

PhotoShop is a great tool, but you gotta have something to work
with first. Again, you need to show here what you originally have
straight out of camera so they can help you. This particular image
looks very “fixed-up” to me on my monitor. Maybe it has this look
because it is so small.

No one here wants to see you put out fabulous images more than I
do...I think I’ve proved that to you. I swore I’d never post a
self-portrait and ask for help, but I ended up doing it mainly so
you could see how to get others to help you on this forum. Follow
the threads and see what I started out with and when instructions
were provided, I went back and did it again. I didn’t end up with
professional quality images, but I did learn something and I did
improve and you can follow the progress.

There is another here who is doing about the same as you. He posts
an image asking for help and gets good advice, but does nothing
with it. He’ll come back and post a similar image and you can see
that he tried nothing that was previously suggested.

Melissa, you have two simple choices here. 1. Do as everyone has
been suggesting and watch yourself evolve into a good photographer.
2. Keep explaining why you are or aren’t doing what is suggested
and continue to be a snap shooter with lots of fancy equipment. It
is your choice to make. I’m sorry to be so blunt, but that is the
simplicity of it.

Good luck,
Rodney
Joe Peoples writes:

From what little I've read about Melissa's posts, I've noticed that she's become the Resident Whipping Girl, and I'm not sure why. First of all, you can't nail Jell-O to a wall. People learn what they want, when they want. It would be much better for you to continue on your own journey, post the pics here, along with comments and thoughts, and take others along with you.

As far as your comments about "proper clothing" and "cleaning up the boy's face": There are two trains of thought concerning portraits. One is the Mount Rushmore approach, where knowledge of the proper head turn, brightest part of the picture, 3.72583:1 lighting ratio, comes in handy. The other is the "Slice of Life" portrait. I LOVE the pajamas and the girl's "biker" look. If the boy is a sloppy eater, why not mush MORE food on his face...if that's who he is. Most of the studio portraiture you see is so devoid of personality, the people are just another prop. The backgrounds, which are only supposed to be "limbo" and add some perceived depth, have become the stars of the images. Follow your instincts, take a few risks, have some FUN.
 
Wow What a jerk...Rodney you sound like you are getting paid for
resonding to this post...If you don't like the way this young lady is working

then keep it to yourself...This place is about learning....you need to learn how real pro's give advice.Your rank way of giving you adivce make it real
plain how much of a amature your are.
Stephen
Hi Melissa,

I’m not condemning your work here. It could have been one of those
priceless moments if you had taken the time to get suitable
clothing and cleaned up the boys face just a little.

I still do not understand why you have two meter readings.

Cropping is ok after you get the hang of framing the image in your
viewfinder. If you expect people here to be able to help you, you
need to post the images as close to what you get straight out of
the camera.

PhotoShop is a great tool, but you gotta have something to work
with first. Again, you need to show here what you originally have
straight out of camera so they can help you. This particular image
looks very “fixed-up” to me on my monitor. Maybe it has this look
because it is so small.

No one here wants to see you put out fabulous images more than I
do...I think I’ve proved that to you. I swore I’d never post a
self-portrait and ask for help, but I ended up doing it mainly so
you could see how to get others to help you on this forum. Follow
the threads and see what I started out with and when instructions
were provided, I went back and did it again. I didn’t end up with
professional quality images, but I did learn something and I did
improve and you can follow the progress.

There is another here who is doing about the same as you. He posts
an image asking for help and gets good advice, but does nothing
with it. He’ll come back and post a similar image and you can see
that he tried nothing that was previously suggested.

Melissa, you have two simple choices here. 1. Do as everyone has
been suggesting and watch yourself evolve into a good photographer.
2. Keep explaining why you are or aren’t doing what is suggested
and continue to be a snap shooter with lots of fancy equipment. It
is your choice to make. I’m sorry to be so blunt, but that is the
simplicity of it.

Good luck,
Rodney
 
Here are some of my thoughts on the image, and what you may consider trying to implement to help push it along somewhat.

When having anyone looking off in the distance as these youngsters are, have them always just turn their heads up, and let their eyes follow. Tell them to point their noses at a target, and let the eyes follow. The young lady has her head too low, forcing the eyes upward toward her target.

Lighting is OK, but I feel the image has been worked up quite a bit in PS. If not, my bad. Clothing is important. If you like Low Key work, both should be wearing low key outfits [dark].

Trust me, I will shoot a lady in a white dress in a Low Key shot in a heart beat if I think I can pull it off. It wouldn't be the first time ;) In this case, I think they both should be wearing darker outfits. Her blouse / his P.J.'s

Keep pushing foward....
I finally got a backdrop and put it to use tonight using practice
shots. I took several shots. One was 1/125 at f/8 and one that was
1/125 f/16 of which is the one I am posting in here. I wanted to
share this one.

Nevermind the wrinkles or pose. I will work on those later.

Melissa



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I certainly didn't mean to sound as I was putting down her efforts...she just need to prove to everyone here that she is trying and not just say, "Look what I got" and expect to get help. She indicated to me that she is trying and wants to learn, but no one can help her unless she tries. That is all she has to do and noone will expect her to progress at any preset speed. Anyway, that is my take on how it works on here. I watched alot before I dared to ask for assistance.

I believe in Melissa and think her desire to create nice images will one day happen despite what others have said.

I guess my point was that instead of catching her children at a moment she could get them to sit long enough for a snap, she needs to put a little more planning and thought into what she is doing.

I was using AOL when I first looked at this image and didn't realize it at the time, but AOL compressed it and made it look AWFUL and fixed up...It does look more appealing now that I'm using my regular web browser.

Take care,
Rodney
Hi Melissa,

I’m not condemning your work here. It could have been one of those
priceless moments if you had taken the time to get suitable
clothing and cleaned up the boys face just a little.

I still do not understand why you have two meter readings.

Cropping is ok after you get the hang of framing the image in your
viewfinder. If you expect people here to be able to help you, you
need to post the images as close to what you get straight out of
the camera.

PhotoShop is a great tool, but you gotta have something to work
with first. Again, you need to show here what you originally have
straight out of camera so they can help you. This particular image
looks very “fixed-up” to me on my monitor. Maybe it has this look
because it is so small.

No one here wants to see you put out fabulous images more than I
do...I think I’ve proved that to you. I swore I’d never post a
self-portrait and ask for help, but I ended up doing it mainly so
you could see how to get others to help you on this forum. Follow
the threads and see what I started out with and when instructions
were provided, I went back and did it again. I didn’t end up with
professional quality images, but I did learn something and I did
improve and you can follow the progress.

There is another here who is doing about the same as you. He posts
an image asking for help and gets good advice, but does nothing
with it. He’ll come back and post a similar image and you can see
that he tried nothing that was previously suggested.

Melissa, you have two simple choices here. 1. Do as everyone has
been suggesting and watch yourself evolve into a good photographer.
2. Keep explaining why you are or aren’t doing what is suggested
and continue to be a snap shooter with lots of fancy equipment. It
is your choice to make. I’m sorry to be so blunt, but that is the
simplicity of it.

Good luck,
Rodney
Joe Peoples writes:

From what little I've read about Melissa's posts, I've noticed that
she's become the Resident Whipping Girl, and I'm not sure why.
First of all, you can't nail Jell-O to a wall. People learn what
they want, when they want. It would be much better for you to
continue on your own journey, post the pics here, along with
comments and thoughts, and take others along with you.

As far as your comments about "proper clothing" and "cleaning up
the boy's face": There are two trains of thought concerning
portraits. One is the Mount Rushmore approach, where knowledge of
the proper head turn, brightest part of the picture, 3.72583:1
lighting ratio, comes in handy. The other is the "Slice of Life"
portrait. I LOVE the pajamas and the girl's "biker" look. If the
boy is a sloppy eater, why not mush MORE food on his face...if
that's who he is. Most of the studio portraiture you see is so
devoid of personality, the people are just another prop. The
backgrounds, which are only supposed to be "limbo" and add some
perceived depth, have become the stars of the images. Follow your
instincts, take a few risks, have some FUN.
 
I am an amature and have never considered being anything more, which is why I'm here. I learn by watching others learn and hope others will learn by watching me learn. This isn't a forum to come and post a "look what I got" picture. It is a lighting tehnique forum!

Melissa is a good girl and we correspond via e-mail. I think she will be the first to tell you that I've shared what little(and I do mean little) I know with her to help her get this far.

Now, if I should keep it to myself that I don't like the way she is working, then shouldn't you keep it to yourself how I'm responding??

Rodney
Hi Melissa,

I’m not condemning your work here. It could have been one of those
priceless moments if you had taken the time to get suitable
clothing and cleaned up the boys face just a little.

I still do not understand why you have two meter readings.

Cropping is ok after you get the hang of framing the image in your
viewfinder. If you expect people here to be able to help you, you
need to post the images as close to what you get straight out of
the camera.

PhotoShop is a great tool, but you gotta have something to work
with first. Again, you need to show here what you originally have
straight out of camera so they can help you. This particular image
looks very “fixed-up” to me on my monitor. Maybe it has this look
because it is so small.

No one here wants to see you put out fabulous images more than I
do...I think I’ve proved that to you. I swore I’d never post a
self-portrait and ask for help, but I ended up doing it mainly so
you could see how to get others to help you on this forum. Follow
the threads and see what I started out with and when instructions
were provided, I went back and did it again. I didn’t end up with
professional quality images, but I did learn something and I did
improve and you can follow the progress.

There is another here who is doing about the same as you. He posts
an image asking for help and gets good advice, but does nothing
with it. He’ll come back and post a similar image and you can see
that he tried nothing that was previously suggested.

Melissa, you have two simple choices here. 1. Do as everyone has
been suggesting and watch yourself evolve into a good photographer.
2. Keep explaining why you are or aren’t doing what is suggested
and continue to be a snap shooter with lots of fancy equipment. It
is your choice to make. I’m sorry to be so blunt, but that is the
simplicity of it.

Good luck,
Rodney
 
You ought to read some of the poster's history before making this judgment. ( Melissa's).

These people honestly want to help her. Someone recently posted a thread about different types of "learners". I thought it very accurate and worth re-reading. I'll see if I can find it and post a link.
Wow What a jerk...Rodney you sound like you are getting paid for
resonding to this post...If you don't like the way this young lady
is working
then keep it to yourself...This place is about learning....you need
to learn how real pro's give advice.Your rank way of giving you
adivce make it real
plain how much of a amature your are.
Stephen
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http://www.caughtintimephotography.com

 
when I chastised one of the professionals that contributes to this forum because I thought he was being ugly to Melissa. You think he will be willing to offer any advice to me??

Rodney
Hi Melissa,

I’m not condemning your work here. It could have been one of those
priceless moments if you had taken the time to get suitable
clothing and cleaned up the boys face just a little.

I still do not understand why you have two meter readings.

Cropping is ok after you get the hang of framing the image in your
viewfinder. If you expect people here to be able to help you, you
need to post the images as close to what you get straight out of
the camera.

PhotoShop is a great tool, but you gotta have something to work
with first. Again, you need to show here what you originally have
straight out of camera so they can help you. This particular image
looks very “fixed-up” to me on my monitor. Maybe it has this look
because it is so small.

No one here wants to see you put out fabulous images more than I
do...I think I’ve proved that to you. I swore I’d never post a
self-portrait and ask for help, but I ended up doing it mainly so
you could see how to get others to help you on this forum. Follow
the threads and see what I started out with and when instructions
were provided, I went back and did it again. I didn’t end up with
professional quality images, but I did learn something and I did
improve and you can follow the progress.

There is another here who is doing about the same as you. He posts
an image asking for help and gets good advice, but does nothing
with it. He’ll come back and post a similar image and you can see
that he tried nothing that was previously suggested.

Melissa, you have two simple choices here. 1. Do as everyone has
been suggesting and watch yourself evolve into a good photographer.
2. Keep explaining why you are or aren’t doing what is suggested
and continue to be a snap shooter with lots of fancy equipment. It
is your choice to make. I’m sorry to be so blunt, but that is the
simplicity of it.

Good luck,
Rodney
 
As far as your comments about "proper clothing" and "cleaning up
the boy's face": There are two trains of thought concerning
portraits. One is the Mount Rushmore approach, where knowledge of
the proper head turn, brightest part of the picture, 3.72583:1
lighting ratio, comes in handy. The other is the "Slice of Life"
portrait. I LOVE the pajamas and the girl's "biker" look. If the
boy is a sloppy eater, why not mush MORE food on his face...if
that's who he is. Most of the studio portraiture you see is so
devoid of personality, the people are just another prop. The
backgrounds, which are only supposed to be "limbo" and add some
perceived depth, have become the stars of the images. Follow your
instincts, take a few risks, have some FUN.
Rodney's points are well made here. The comment was not about whether the snap-shot aesthetic is better than a studio shot. Clearly Melissa took time to purchase and assemble a comprehensive studio set up including strobes and a backdrop. I believe that her intent was to reproduce some of the great images that we've seen on this forum. As we look at the successful images we can see that the planning of those shots extended past the lights and backdrop into wardrobe, hair and makeup. There is nothing wrong with pajamas, but the combination of the outfits and the formal lighting and backdrop attempt do not work well in this case.
 
The link to the original file is below. The file is large for slow connections.

http://www.pbase.com/image/26229822/original

Rodney
I finally got a backdrop and put it to use tonight using practice
shots. I took several shots. One was 1/125 at f/8 and one that was
1/125 f/16 of which is the one I am posting in here. I wanted to
share this one.

Nevermind the wrinkles or pose. I will work on those later.

Melissa



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Yes, it does... and I actually see some improvement in this photo when comparing them to previous efforts. I'd like to see a different composition/crop. But the backdrop and lighting work well together. Melissa, do reshoot this one with the kids dressed for the shot. I think you're onto something here.
Also, mind telling us where you got the back drop?
The link to the original file is below. The file is large for slow
connections.

http://www.pbase.com/image/26229822/original

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First of all Joe, I was not aiming for posing and I asked the kids to sit down long enough for me to take a picture using this backdrop. Posing and kids getting dressed up for practice pictures is not what I want for now. I am aiming for exposure and DOF. These kids are not too patient to want to sit for more than one or two pictures. I can't pose them get them to sit still because they won't. I'm lucky to have them them for a few minutes so I do what I can when I can and that is good enough for me for now. Joe Peoples wrote:
Hi Melissa,

I’m not condemning your work here. It could have been one of those
priceless moments if you had taken the time to get suitable
clothing and cleaned up the boys face just a little.

I still do not understand why you have two meter readings.

Cropping is ok after you get the hang of framing the image in your
viewfinder. If you expect people here to be able to help you, you
need to post the images as close to what you get straight out of
the camera.

PhotoShop is a great tool, but you gotta have something to work
with first. Again, you need to show here what you originally have
straight out of camera so they can help you. This particular image
looks very “fixed-up” to me on my monitor. Maybe it has this look
because it is so small.

No one here wants to see you put out fabulous images more than I
do...I think I’ve proved that to you. I swore I’d never post a
self-portrait and ask for help, but I ended up doing it mainly so
you could see how to get others to help you on this forum. Follow
the threads and see what I started out with and when instructions
were provided, I went back and did it again. I didn’t end up with
professional quality images, but I did learn something and I did
improve and you can follow the progress.

There is another here who is doing about the same as you. He posts
an image asking for help and gets good advice, but does nothing
with it. He’ll come back and post a similar image and you can see
that he tried nothing that was previously suggested.

Melissa, you have two simple choices here. 1. Do as everyone has
been suggesting and watch yourself evolve into a good photographer.
2. Keep explaining why you are or aren’t doing what is suggested
and continue to be a snap shooter with lots of fancy equipment. It
is your choice to make. I’m sorry to be so blunt, but that is the
simplicity of it.

Good luck,
Rodney
Joe Peoples writes:

From what little I've read about Melissa's posts, I've noticed that
she's become the Resident Whipping Girl, and I'm not sure why.
First of all, you can't nail Jell-O to a wall. People learn what
they want, when they want. It would be much better for you to
continue on your own journey, post the pics here, along with
comments and thoughts, and take others along with you.

As far as your comments about "proper clothing" and "cleaning up
the boy's face": There are two trains of thought concerning
portraits. One is the Mount Rushmore approach, where knowledge of
the proper head turn, brightest part of the picture, 3.72583:1
lighting ratio, comes in handy. The other is the "Slice of Life"
portrait. I LOVE the pajamas and the girl's "biker" look. If the
boy is a sloppy eater, why not mush MORE food on his face...if
that's who he is. Most of the studio portraiture you see is so
devoid of personality, the people are just another prop. The
backgrounds, which are only supposed to be "limbo" and add some
perceived depth, have become the stars of the images. Follow your
instincts, take a few risks, have some FUN.
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I think you need to back off from condeming me to other members. I get really tired of people like you that think you are so perfect yourself. No one is a fast learner and photography, lighting, DOF etc is a slow process for me. I don't practice everyday like you must do because I have 4 children to raise. You started somewhere once too and maybe it wasn't a learning curve for you but it is for me and you coming in and talking bad about me to other members such as azroin is not professional...
Wow What a jerk...Rodney you sound like you are getting paid for
resonding to this post...If you don't like the way this young lady
is working
then keep it to yourself...This place is about learning....you need
to learn how real pro's give advice.Your rank way of giving you
adivce make it real
plain how much of a amature your are.
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Excuse me Melissa, I am NOT talking bad about you. Look farther down in this thread.

I am merely pointing out to some posters that this debate concerning what you're doing with your learning has been rehashed over and over again. I am far from perfect and I know it.
Wow What a jerk...Rodney you sound like you are getting paid for
resonding to this post...If you don't like the way this young lady
is working
then keep it to yourself...This place is about learning....you need
to learn how real pro's give advice.Your rank way of giving you
adivce make it real
plain how much of a amature your are.
Stephen
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Oh, and don't give me " I have four children to raise"... I have 2 of my own and am rearing them on my own with NO help. I work full time, too. I go days and days without shooting. So no sympathy from me for this excuse.
I think you need to back off from condeming me to other members. I
get really tired of people like you that think you are so perfect
yourself. No one is a fast learner and photography, lighting, DOF
etc is a slow process for me. I don't practice everyday like you
must do because I have 4 children to raise. You started somewhere
once too and maybe it wasn't a learning curve for you but it is for
me and you coming in and talking bad about me to other members such
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