Cindy,
Thanks for the explanation. That's a bummer for Sarah. Tell her to hurry up and turn 18 so we can enjoy her photography again!
In the meatime...
I worked on your photograph this afternoon, it's really a great
shot...it just needs a little spice. I did a lot of really little
adjustments: tinkered the levels, used the lasso to select
everything above the water
Did you actually select along the water? I sort of tried that but
got frustrated pretty quickly.
I used the lasso and dragged it along the edge of the water and rocks (but not the birds, I liked how the light shines through their wings) and then around the edges of the picture. Under "selection" you can feather your selection. I did mine by approx 50 pixels. This creates a gradual effect rather than a hard effect.
and increased red and yellow saturation
(+15 - 20) and lowered the brightness and raised the contrast,
used the gradiant to add ND (and a little yellow) above the rocks (on
separate layers of about 5 - 15% opacity), and the airbrush for a
little sky work.
Here is where you lose me ND?
Neutral Density. It's just like putting a graduated ND filter on your camera. Create a second layer. Using the gradiant tool (make sure you select fades to transparancy) fade from black (on the top) to nothing near the red in the center. I clicked about halfway up in the yellow and dragged straight down to about halfway through the red. You can adjust the opacity of the layer to create the desired amount of darkening. For the black layer, I used about 5-7%. I did the same thing again, but this time with a really bright and heavy yellow (the strongest yellow I could find in the picture). The only variation is that I used about 15-20% opacity on this layer.
I even made another layer and used the airbrush with several different shades of of yellows in the picture (stronger ones) and then faded it to about 10% to create a little more texture in the blown out area.
All of these layers added nothing below the middle of the picture. They were all to deal with the sky.
Other things I did with the picture:
Unsharp Mask: just play with it until you get the desired texture and sharpness.
Black airbrush over the rocks to get rid of some noise.
The first thing I did with the picture was to lighten the entire thing enough so that I could have definition in the water and the fourth bird down below. Otherwise the water would have been to dark and you never would have even known he was there. One of my goals, however, was to really get a good sillouette (I like that effect in sunrises/sets). So later I had alot more playing room.
Yes, if you don't mind I would love to learn more. This is really
impressive. The water looks light and detailed. The noise is
gone. It is a little yellow for my taste but the work is great.
Would love to know more details so I can give it a shot myself.
Thanks!
The first pic I made I liked really well...then I looked at the water. It took another couple of attempts to get it right. In the end, I'm happy with it. Yes, I struggle with the too much vs. too little color...I find this is the most difficult thing to do (you add some and it looks good, but when you take it back away the picture just looks sour), especially with other peoples photos (read: I wasn't there...how do I know what it looked like?). The most challenging thing about the picture, and the one part that I'm not 100% satisfied with yet, is the sky. It's a very difficult sky to work with. I like to stay as true to reality as possible when doing photoshop work. Given that it wasn't my photo, I took the saturation a little further than I normally do, but I've also taken sunsets many times only to see that they looked much more vivid in person...so I put a bit more in there just in case
If you have anymore questions...please don't hesitiate to ask. I'm not a professional by any means...just another person trying to help out where I can. Have fun playing with PS!
-NewSushi