Guidenet wrote:
Several things. For starters, why not describe the Sony 50 f/1.8e model the typical way instead of using Sony's catalog number? I'm not sure why so many do that with Sony only. You wouldn't see a Nikon user saying I clicked this with a D5200 and a dr4371 lens.

He's say 50 f/1.8G if that's what it was.
Now for the image. I assumed you used a tripod and carefully positioned yourself. If so, excellent job. Lots of drama with that much side lighting. I wish there was a tiny catchlight in your eyes.
Could you have moved the camera farther away and used a tighter lens? The 50mm this close tends to exaggerate the features a little. Secondly, I'd have shot at a lot smaller ISO and seen if I could have held still a little longer. 1/3 of a second would have gotten you down to ISO800 so the noise and speckling could have been a lot less. I see a hint of features on the left side from my side looking at you. The problem is that the shadows are completely blown. When they are blown, they look blotchy rather than pleasantly fading away. I recommend keeping everything in the histogram and not changing ISO to bring them back. That just drops your dynamic range and poof, the shadows blotch out.
Leave that left side visible n the camera and when you get home, fade them into black if you want for a smooth transition and a whole lot less noise.
Overall, though, I like the concept. That's a great start.
Now here's my self portrait. The only light I had was a 640 ws monolight with a 22 inch beauty dish.
Shhh.. don't tell Molly I'm swiping her identity. ;-)
Have a great weekend.
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