Jessi *NSFW*

Started Jul 12, 2012 | Discussions thread
andrewsf Contributing Member • Posts: 584
Re: Jessi *NSFW*

Thanks for posting these.

I'm assuming you are posting for C&C and not just some internet forum back patting.

The processing is interesting but feels harsh and cold.

The first shot, you've chopped off her legs, scalp and one elbow. It's kind of like "LOOK AT HER NUDE TORSO"

The second shot, I feel, is better but it still looks awkward. I do like the lighting, but its still a bit cold.

However, without people posting examples of their work this forum would be pretty boring, so I do appreciate you having the guts to put your work on display. I've also noticed some of your previous work to be of higher quality than this so I know what you're capable of.

Cheers
Andrew
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