lol, sempai. I think people are reluctent to give serious
criticism around here, which is sad. People will say "wow, great
shot" which is always wonderful to hear, but I also enjoy a more
serious response, even if it's not a "knocked me over with that
I hearby go on notice. I will not take better pictures without
thoughtful, good criticism. Nobody is doing me favors with silence
or back-patting!
I appreciate your comments greatly, and am already preparing for
more photographs with another model taking your comments to heart.
I hope I can do them justice.
intimately familiar with THAT concept!). The model needed to be
just a little more visible in the shot, it's almost too hard to
This was a poor choice for B&W. I compare the results from the
color and the model is much more visible and I'm not certain if its
the light skin or red hair that really makes the character stand
out - but it is apparent that I chose poorly, trying to shoe-horn
rather than take something that naturally was going to work out in
B&W.
penetration through the netting and to also create more hide and
seek with the shadows it creates? I don't know, as I said, I like
ding! good thought. will do.
lighting. I would have liked to have seen what your new light
setup could have done for you!! I think this type of shot needs to
I assure you it is doing more harm than good sometimes! I run fans
while I do shoots because I was limited in budget and got a trio of
Big Bad Lamps!
be more "bold" and I don't mean "nudity" I think what nudity there
is in this shot is just fine, a "hint" but nothing you don't see on
TV (in fact, far less).
I didn't think the content would offend anyone. It's very disguised.
This may not have been helpful, but it's the best I can do as I'm
in between packing for a trip tomorrow
Frank, I appreciate your comments a lot. I hope to do right by you
in the future and one day you'll say to yourself "hey, the punk kid
from D.C. finally gets it."
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