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Beautiful sky! Well Exposed! of the 3 I like the window shot [it does what it was intended to do at least from my point of view].

However, the first 2 give me an unsettled feeling. Most bulidings and other still subjects have a foreground. You have eliminated this with out concentrating on the tower.

I have looked at many of your photos and like them a lot. However, these 2 still bother me [Sorry!] Perhaps in addition to the missing foreground the perspective bothers me; I'm not sure.

It is highly possible others will like the photos due to the fact they seem to violate the standard "rules" of perspective and composition. For that reason I suggest you continue to expirement and see what you like perhaps you will find a new "rule" or variation of composition.

This is one of the harshest critiques I've given recently, not because I question your ability but because I am impressed by it. Please try not to be insulted but simply take the comments as my point of view. If you find it valuable put it to use, otherwise ignore it.

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Ray
RJNedimyer
 
Thanks very much! I like the window shot also.

ar... becoz I told those pics kind of hurry, that's why I only took 3 of them. Yes, I skip the foregound becoz the foreground has lots of car in front of the building.... I will defintely go there later on weekend to take more pics. Hope can improve more.

Honestly I like your comments becoz I can really learn something about my pics. If the comments are just a word "good" or "bad", I cannot get anything from it. Thanks again, RJ!
Beautiful sky! Well Exposed! of the 3 I like the window shot [it
does what it was intended to do at least from my point of view].

However, the first 2 give me an unsettled feeling. Most bulidings
and other still subjects have a foreground. You have eliminated
this with out concentrating on the tower.

I have looked at many of your photos and like them a lot. However,
these 2 still bother me [Sorry!] Perhaps in addition to the missing
foreground the perspective bothers me; I'm not sure.

It is highly possible others will like the photos due to the fact
they seem to violate the standard "rules" of perspective and
composition. For that reason I suggest you continue to expirement
and see what you like perhaps you will find a new "rule" or
variation of composition.

This is one of the harshest critiques I've given recently, not
because I question your ability but because I am impressed by it.
Please try not to be insulted but simply take the comments as my
point of view. If you find it valuable put it to use, otherwise
ignore it.

--
Ray
RJNedimyer
 
ar... becoz I told those pics kind of hurry, that's why I only took
3 of them. Yes, I skip the foregound becoz the foreground has lots
of car in front of the building.... I will defintely go there later
on weekend to take more pics. Hope can improve more.

Honestly I like your comments becoz I can really learn something
about my pics. If the comments are just a word "good" or "bad", I
cannot get anything from it. Thanks again, RJ!
WHEW!!!! It's tough getting critiqued and you are very gracious about it!

I was half afraid to click on "post". You handled it well!!

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Ray
RJNedimyer
 

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