Portraits for C&C

Ryon

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Trying to get my "white" nailed in. Coments well accepted on improving my teqnique.







 
First let me say great looking kids.

IMO just a little flat not much, also it looks like maybe about a 1/2 stop to much flash and even more on the girl (maybe 2/3 or so). Hope this helps a little.

Maybe Gene L. will see this and give you his view, he's a pretty good CC guy.

GO
 
I like these. Is it my eyes or are the shots of the boy's eyes not completely sharp. The posed fist on chin is not my favourite pose. Other poses are nice and natural. Shot of girls is most interesting. Love the baby's smile and his hat. Thanks for sharing.
 
Kids are very cute, white seems bright enough. To me, these look a bit over processed- almost like a smudge. Highlights on the skin are a bit blown out and all skin texture is gone. If that's what you're after, then you nailed it. Everybody has different taste in processing so I'm sure you'll get a variety of responses. When using a polarizer, lots of folks want to crank as much blue in the sky as possible but sometimes moderation can work out better. Just because you can doesn't always mean that you should.
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Try less light, less saturation, less skin PP IMO. And try to tell the kid to look more far away so he wouldn't have crossed eyes (if that's how they say it)
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Canon, you can... Nikon, unique... :)
 
its hard to judge your photos with all that plastic. IE bad photoshop sorry :) Technically they look fine
 
Beautiful kids, of course. Nice expressions. Lots to like.

Two things jump out at me right away- both have already been noted in this thread. I am really wishing the eyes were in sharp focus. Second, very few young children need this much post processing. PP is, of course, a matter of personal taste. Do you feel the amount of PP truly enhances this set of images?

Regards,

-- Rob
 
Agree with the comments about too much noise reduction/smoothing.

Also, are all the light sources the same temperature? It kind of looks like maybe there is same white and tungsten light mixing together as the skin tones look warm, but the background does look whiite. Could just be the post processing that you did though.
 
Good looking passion killers!, my comments
  • too much PP on their skin
  • Need to increase overall ambient lighting in studio, It looks like the there was PP done on the overall background lighting to bring up the white.
  • Need to increase overall ambient lighting in studio, part deux - While boosting ISO and opening up your lens increases the sensitivity and efficiency of the light, it has the side effect of opening up the pupil too much, and the catch lights look much more noticeable. The pupils in shots #1, #2, & #3 are just humongous.
  • Need to balance their faces with some soft shadows, even lighting across the face will flatten them out.
 
agreed with the skin comment—a bit too smooth. especially with youngsters, i guess they have great skin that most of us would like to have again, so it's maybe nice to keep a light hand on it.

i love the second shot. cute kid.
 
Thanks for all the comments! Ill post the same pics with less PP and see what you think.
 

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