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I'm still learning (big-time!), so I'd like some feedback. In keeping with this site's policy, these links are not embedded. Please let me know your thoughts. Is there still too much noise in the B&W photo? I think it's just a coincidence that the model's head/neck is in roughly the same position for all three pics. Thanks in advance for your thoughts!

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--In the first shot it appears that the colours are off.

The bra seems to be coming off in the last shot. Not that that's a bad thing, but it doesn't look quite right.

Jim Rickards
 
IMO... smooth out her stomach and side, preferably with softer lighting or maybe do what the magazines do and Photoshop it. Other wise good job, but woman's flaws should always be hidden. If you were married you would know this ;-)

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'The truth is rarely pure and never simple' Oscar Wilde
 
I'd encourage you to post them on backgrounds other than pure white - it's hard to know what the edges of your photos are, and therefore hard to judge your composition.

I think the first one is a little too warm. With a different background it might not matter that much, but against the white the light is very, very warm, and feels unnatural. I like the smile in the first one a lot. Real joyful smiles add a lot to portraits.

I'm not a fan of implants, though ... and as natural as the smile is, other parts of her are ... not. This is particularly an issue in the second shot.
 
To put it mildly, the skin color on the first one reminds me of when my grandfather's liver failed right before he passed away. Not good. I like warm colors but that is a unnatural yellow, not warm color.

I also agree that the implants don't look good from that angle.

I dropped your picture in DPP and dinked with saturation, hue and contrast a touch and she can look much better with a more natural warm than that.

I am not good at air brushing or I would have experimented with helping her with her cellulite.
 
Very nice model, and technically good, but they give me the impression that you're not quite clear which genre you're working in. They are stuck between art nude and pinup. I just think you need to decide which you're going for. Personally, I don't have much time for so-called 'art nude', it seems to me to be slightly hypocritical as a genre, and is also an objectification of the model. Good pinups should, like all good portraiture, reveal the personality of the subject, kind of the opposite of 'art-nude'. That personality thing is also a big help in making them pretty damn erotic, if done well.

There are some active bb's on Photocamel for CC on this kind of subject, some pretty expert practitioners posting there, too.

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Bob

 
I do not have anything against women , nudity, implants - or whatever. But our culture - especially internet - and "normal" media is nowadays so filled with images of female bodies that there really is no place amateur nude photography. It is totally impossible to balance between pseudo artistic artsy pictures ,pin-ups , calenders, pornography , soft-p. or the overall exploitation of human body as a marketing tool...

Do you really think you can find a sensible way to be an amateur inside this extremely wide nude genre ? You can get technically good and better pictures , but what is the point ? Always copying somebody.

As a private hobby ( like with your wife / girlfriend ) it can be fun (with certain risks) - but what is the idea of showing nude images nowadays? It is very likely easier to make more artistic and genuinely personal images with dressed models - with their own personal clothes and gear . Or what do people think ?

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Kari
SLR photography for 40 years
60°15´N 24°03´ E
 
I do not have anything against women , nudity, implants - or
whatever. But our culture - especially internet - and "normal" media
is nowadays so filled with images of female bodies that there really
is no place amateur nude photography. It is totally impossible to
balance between pseudo artistic artsy pictures ,pin-ups , calenders,
pornography , soft-p. or the overall exploitation of human body as a
marketing tool...
Is the same argument not also true of landscapes, architectural shots, travel photography. All of them have some ethical issues involved (e.g carbon usage for travel). Just like pictures of bodies, the media is full of them. By your argument, there is no place for amateur photography at all.
Do you really think you can find a sensible way to be an amateur
inside this extremely wide nude genre ? You can get technically good
and better pictures , but what is the point ? Always copying somebody.
Again, the same is true of any genre, most photography is extremely derivative, so what?
As a private hobby ( like with your wife / girlfriend ) it can be fun
(with certain risks) - but what is the idea of showing nude images
nowadays? It is very likely easier to make more artistic and
genuinely personal images with dressed models - with their own
personal clothes and gear . Or what do people think ?
I think if people want to make humourous images, they should do so. If they want to make arresting images, they should do so. If they want to make touching images, they should do so. If they want to make erotic images, they should do so.
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Bob

 
Hi

Things are not so simple.

And i do not protest if you want to shoot nude models - if it is important, just do it.

Main main "issue" was the fact that nude models are also human beings. Nudity has so many other links to sexuality,law, old moral , porn - you just name it - it is not just flower , rock or a house. Or do you think humans are just like that - free subjects. What if you shoot a nude girl under 18 - or a child? Is it just like any landscape ? You can end up in prison. Or something else in some strict fundamentalist society - in US - or Middle East.

The usage of human body in commercial marketing etc has very much spoiled the "language or expression" (i do not find the exact word ) of nude images or how we see and take them. OPs images were also obviously using too much of the common language. OK images as such , but really - what is the point.

And why did he not photograph his male friends nude ? If nudity is just like a a very neutral landscape there should not be any problems in photographing nude males as well - by a male amateur. Amateurs do it quite seldom of some reason.

And photographing a landscape - or what ever - is much more easy to do in your own way, time and light - and the model does not need money .

And of course i understand that even the HIGH ART is copying and presenting old themes - a continuum of tradition . There is not very much new under the sun - but i sometimes still shoot landscapes ; ). And people in clothes.

I am not trying to set rules - i would like to hear about thoughts...

Peace!

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Kari
SLR photography for 40 years
60°15´N 24°03´ E
 
Main main "issue" was the fact that nude models are also human
beings.
And here is the crux of the issue. You seem to be implying that doing nude photography somehow dehumanizes the subject.

The subjects of the nude photographs I've taken have been human beings - who have been delighted with the pictures I've taken. I've been approached by people and asked to take nude photos of them.

Yes, the models in nude photographs are human beings - many of whom do not share your view that this is something they shouldn't be doing.
What if you
shoot a nude girl under 18 - or a child? Is it just like any
landscape ? You can end up in prison. Or something else in some
strict fundamentalist society - in US - or Middle East.
Well, in some countries there are laws against shooting government buildings. By your logic, you shouldn't shoot ANY buildings because what happens if you shoot a government building?

Care must be taken with respect to nude photographs, but that's mostly because we're a squeamish society. Certainly cases like Jaques Sturges show that you can shoot photographs of nude minors and not violate the law ... but that you may have to fight you case in court anyway.
The usage of human body in commercial marketing etc has very much
spoiled the "language or expression" (i do not find the exact word )
of nude images or how we see and take them. OPs images were also
obviously using too much of the common language. OK images as such ,
but really - what is the point.
This is a little odd, because the one thing you don't see regularly in "commercial marketing etc" is nude photographs.
And why did he not photograph his male friends nude ? If nudity is
just like a a very neutral landscape there should not be any problems
in photographing nude males as well - by a male amateur. Amateurs do
it quite seldom of some reason.
I've shot naked men before. But I freely admit that I shoot more women, overall, than I shoot men - nude or clothed. And it's not "for some reason" - it's pretty simple:

We shoot subjects which speak to us or move us. Female nudity holds my interest and compells me to photograph it more than male nudity does. As a society, we have a much greater tolerance for male nudity anyway.
And photographing a landscape - or what ever - is much more easy to
do in your own way, time and light - and the model does not need
money .
Since when was the ease of getting a shot an important factor in decided if the shot had artistic merit?
 
Hi

Things are not so simple.
And i do not protest if you want to shoot nude models - if it is
important, just do it.
I wasn't waiting for your permission.
Main main "issue" was the fact that nude models are also human
beings.
They wouldn't be so interesting if they weren't.
Nudity has so many other links to sexuality,law, old moral ,
porn - you just name it - it is not just flower , rock or a house. Or
do you think humans are just like that - free subjects.
Unlike flowers, rock and houses, human beings agree to the creation of images of them, and then contribute their own personality and creativity to those images. Any shot of a knowing human subject is a collaboration between the photographer and subject - a joint work of creativity, and potentially much more inspiring than inanimate objects.
What if you
shoot a nude girl under 18 - or a child? Is it just like any
landscape ? You can end up in prison. Or something else in some
strict fundamentalist society - in US - or Middle East.
I think it's probably best not to do illegal things if you don't want to end up in prison. If you're photographing nudes, don't employ models under 18. Simple as that. The law prevents young people from driving cars on the open road. That doesn't mean that driving is an activity to be avoided by adults.
The usage of human body in commercial marketing etc has very much
spoiled the "language or expression" (i do not find the exact word )
of nude images or how we see and take them. OPs images were also
obviously using too much of the common language. OK images as such ,
but really - what is the point.
I can't see how this applies uniquely to nudes. Marketing has at the same time given us some wonderful images and despoiled many things. For instance, there are probably many more food images than nude ones used in marketing. Some actually called 'food porn', and one can construct quite a good case for the moral degeneracy of them. Are you suggesting amateurs shouldn't shoot food?

And to answer the last question, the point is to create images which connect with some part of the human condition, in this case the sexual part (rather than the digestive part)
And why did he not photograph his male friends nude ?
Maybe because he didn't want to. Why haven't you taken a picture of 60163 Tornado - it's a wonderful subject? Pure engineering porn.
If nudity is
just like a a very neutral landscape there should not be any problems
in photographing nude males as well - by a male amateur. Amateurs do
it quite seldom of some reason.
Amateurs tend to do what they want, and what is wrong with that. I have no problem with being honest about taking pictures which connect with the sexual part of the human condition, and for me that's a heterosexual condition. I think many of Robert Mapplethorpe's images are wonderful, I'd just have no clue how to do them myself.
And photographing a landscape - or what ever - is much more easy to
do in your own way, time and light - and the model does not need
money .
Which has little to do with anything. All photography is expensive, travel and accommodation to access the landscape can be very expensive, and not all models are professional.
And of course i understand that even the HIGH ART is copying and
presenting old themes - a continuum of tradition . There is not very
much new under the sun - but i sometimes still shoot landscapes ; ).
And people in clothes.
High art, schmigh art. Anyone claiming that they make high art is dealing in pretentious codswallop. The most of us just like to make images which we hope will connect (positively) with others.
I am not trying to set rules - i would like to hear about thoughts...
Luckily, you are in no position to set the rules, but you do seem to be saying that one form of subject matter is for some reason less valid than others. I sense that you're pussyfooting about the subject here - if you think nude photography is morally wrong, then say so. As it is, you're hedging around, not trying to set rules but coming up with circuitous arguments about why really might not ought to be sort of making photographs which might be nudes, if they're female, male ones might be alright, perhaps.

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Bob

 
Hi

Things are not so simple.
And i do not protest if you want to shoot nude models - if it is
important, just do it.
I am not trying to set rules - i would like to hear about thoughts...
Luckily, you are in no position to set the rules, but you do seem to
be saying that one form of subject matter is for some reason less
valid than others.
OK that was a thought.

I can not say anything absolute about this - but my idea was that amateur photographers should also think . It does not harm (thinking i mean). And it does not harm anyone if i do not share your opinions.

I sense that you're pussyfooting about the subject
here - if you think nude photography is morally wrong, then say so.
Moral is so strange thing that i ´d rather not talk about it - we should have moral , but on the other hand people say that we should not say there should be some moral .

I think that todays way using photographs of people and human bodies does not perfectly fit MY personal idea of human dignity. And that is exactly not same thing as just moral.

And if nudity is according to you totally outside any moral concepts because it is something pure , you should ask yourself why you are having an age limit (for nude models). Obviously there are age limits for moral - everything OK when the model is 18 and against your moral a day before that. Moral just changes in one night. And you say nude photography is morally unproblematic - perhaps it is.
As it is, you're hedging around, not trying to set rules but coming
up with circuitous arguments about why really might not ought to be
sort of making photographs which might be nudes, if they're female,
male ones might be alright, perhaps.
So , you mean that if it is morally (whatever that is - legal?) right to you there is nothing to discuss.

To me it is not a moral problem , but i really do not see much point in amateur nude photography. For pros it is a way to make a living - that is not morally wrong IMO.

And i have never seen any impressive nude images by amateurs . Often the childish voyeuristic look or some adults entertaining themselves (but why do they show images to others?) or boring semi porn disguised as "art". Perhaps just bad luck.
If You like nude photography , your models like it and you have a happy audience for you images, i really can not criticize that - why should i ? What moral aspects against it could anyone have?

You have obviously very clear opinions and you think what i say has no logic - and i am not saying this as a result of logic thinking . And you are right - from your point of view.

Some people see human dignity and such things in a different light and that is their way, and problem .

As a totally different nude picture idea, i would like to give an example : I am sure You have seen W. Eugene Smiths photo of Tomoko Uemura being bathed by her mother ( the girl mutilated by guicksilver poisoning in Minamata). The image is artistic , a good photo and it has been socially very important for certain things in Minamata. The photo was sort of a moral problem to the photographer and he finally thought it was wrong to use it against the will of that family.

My idea was to say that nothing is totally neutral. And what is legally right is not just OK. And there is the human dignity... perhaps just nonsense nowadays.

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Peace
Kari
SLR photography for 40 years
60°15´N 24°03´ E
 
And if nudity is according to you totally outside any moral concepts
because it is something pure , you should ask yourself why you are
having an age limit (for nude models). Obviously there are age limits
for moral - everything OK when the model is 18 and against your moral
a day before that. Moral just changes in one night.
I think you're conflating legal and moral.

The legal issue with under-18 photography (which is actually not illegal, even if they're naked) is consent. Because we live in a society where posing for nude pictures CAN be exploitative, and can have negative consequences, we want models who choose to do it to be able to evaluate what they're getting in to.

And the law, unfortunately, doesn't handle nuance well. Undoubtably there are some 17-year-olds who are very capable of making informed decisions about the use of their image. And undoubtably there are 22-year-olds who can't. But we have to draw the dividing line somewhere.

The moral issue is one of taking photos of someone who can not understand what they're consenting to. The legal one is taking inappropriate* pictures of someone underage.

And it needs to be said again, that merely being naked and underage doesn't make a picture indecent. The work of Sally Mann, Jock Sturges, David Hamilton and the like suggests, at the very least, that it is a complicated question.
 
Luckily, you are in no position to set the rules, but you do seem to
be saying that one form of subject matter is for some reason less
valid than others.
OK that was a thought.

I can not say anything absolute about this - but my idea was that
amateur photographers should also think . It does not harm (thinking
i mean). And it does not harm anyone if i do not share your opinions.
Not at all, but you choose to advise the OP that it might not be suitable for an amateur to take nude pictures. I have no problem with you having your opinions, but if you throw them in the ring, you might expect them to be argued with.
I sense that you're pussyfooting about the subject
here - if you think nude photography is morally wrong, then say so.
Moral is so strange thing that i ´d rather not talk about it - we
should have moral , but on the other hand people say that we should
not say there should be some moral .
I think that todays way using photographs of people and human bodies
does not perfectly fit MY personal idea of human dignity. And that
is exactly not same thing as just moral.
That is quite close. The line between a concern for 'human dignity' and 'morals' is thin. At least you acknowledge it's your personal idea of human dignity, different people have different ideas of human dignity, and many ways of compromising human dignity have nothing to do with nakedness or sexuality. Personally, I don't think that either nakedness or sexuality compromises human dignity per se.
And if nudity is according to you totally outside any moral concepts
because it is something pure , you should ask yourself why you are
having an age limit (for nude models).
I never said it was something 'pure', although nudity is in itself neutral, it is merely a state of having no cloths on. As I said in my previous post, I have no problems with images whose impact derives from sexuality, but I don't think sexuality is 'impure' ('purity' is in any case a ludicrous concept applied to people). I do have issues with sexualisation of children, and a simplistic link between that and nudity is responsible for the sort of legislation you're referring to.

However, the more you go on, the more I get convinced that you have a moral position on this, in which case, as I said, please be open and up front about it.
Obviously there are age limits
for moral - everything OK when the model is 18 and against your moral
a day before that. Moral just changes in one night. And you say nude
photography is morally unproblematic - perhaps it is.
That has nothing to do with morals, it has to do with the law. The law is a compromise between what is definable and enforcable and what is desirable.
As it is, you're hedging around, not trying to set rules but coming
up with circuitous arguments about why really might not ought to be
sort of making photographs which might be nudes, if they're female,
male ones might be alright, perhaps.
So , you mean that if it is morally (whatever that is - legal?) right
to you there is nothing to discuss.
I didn't say that at all, I was just asking you to stop pussyfooting around the subject and be open with your opinions.
To me it is not a moral problem , but i really do not see much point
in amateur nude photography. For pros it is a way to make a living -
that is not morally wrong IMO.
What point is there in any amateur photography, in that case, and why don't you apply the same arguments to landscapes, travel photography or whatever. You are making a special case for nudes, and I can't see what it's based on apart from your own morality - or maybe just a bit of priggishness.
And i have never seen any impressive nude images by amateurs . Often
the childish voyeuristic look or some adults entertaining themselves
(but why do they show images to others?) or boring semi porn
disguised as "art". Perhaps just bad luck.
I have no time for people who disguise things as art. Again, have the courage of your convictions. If you like making porn, make it and be proud of it.
If You like nude photography , your models like it and you have a
happy audience for you images, i really can not criticize that - why
should i ? What moral aspects against it could anyone have?

You have obviously very clear opinions and you think what i say has
no logic - and i am not saying this as a result of logic thinking .
And you are right - from your point of view.

Some people see human dignity and such things in a different light
and that is their way, and problem .

As a totally different nude picture idea, i would like to give an
example : I am sure You have seen W. Eugene Smiths photo of Tomoko
Uemura being bathed by her mother ( the girl mutilated by guicksilver
poisoning in Minamata). The image is artistic , a good photo and it
has been socially very important for certain things in Minamata. The
photo was sort of a moral problem to the photographer and he finally
thought it was wrong to use it against the will of that family.

My idea was to say that nothing is totally neutral. And what is
legally right is not just OK. And there is the human dignity...
perhaps just nonsense nowadays.
There was a guy here who posted an image of a weeping man with his just deceased baby in his arms. It was a good image, but I had a big problem with that. It's probably irrational, but it seemed to me an intrusion where it was unwarranted. Simple sexy pictures however... Here's one of mine, not a nude, somewhat cheesy and no claims to art. Couldn't have been made without the creativity of the model, Zoe, and I'll tell you what, the impact on a lot of people (male and female) has been very positive.



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Bob

 
As long as no one is offended by the images, I'd like to stick to technical photography issues. I think in the future I'll stick to posting non-nudes here.

Regarding the colors in the first one, I'm thinking I may need to calibrate my monitor so I can make sure it looks right. I've noticed many of my images look a lot different with different monitors. With that image in particular, I remember feeling like I was adding a lot of yellow to make it look right. I won't post here asking how to calibrate as I'm sure there's a ton of stuff if I google it.

For the black and white, I'm thinking I'll remove more noise in the torso. I think the noise reduction may have already softened her face and hair too much.

Bob--great pic, thanks for sharing.
 
As long as no one is offended by the images, I'd like to stick to
technical photography issues. I think in the future I'll stick to
posting non-nudes here.
There's plenty of space in 150 posts to cover the technical and 'other issues' and DPR is paying for the storage space - go ahead posting nudes, I would, it could usefully be a bit less stuffy here. As I suggested, a useful less stuffy place is Photocamel, you'll get genuine CC from like minded shooters there.
Regarding the colors in the first one, I'm thinking I may need to
calibrate my monitor so I can make sure it looks right. I've noticed
many of my images look a lot different with different monitors. With
that image in particular, I remember feeling like I was adding a lot
of yellow to make it look right. I won't post here asking how to
calibrate as I'm sure there's a ton of stuff if I google it.
I have that issue too, I've just about got used to my different monitors.
For the black and white, I'm thinking I'll remove more noise in the
torso. I think the noise reduction may have already softened her
face and hair too much.
I'm not a fan of going B&W anyway, as I've said several times here, 'arty' isn't my bag.
Bob--great pic, thanks for sharing.
Glad you like it, there was a point to it too. Not a nude, not explicit, but the impact is definitely of a sexual nature. Also, it wouldn't work if Zoe hadn't managed to bring so much of her personality to it (this shot was entirely her idea by the way, I just pushed the shutter release). If people say you can do this with inanimate objects, they are wrong.
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Bob

 
As long as no one is offended by the images, I'd like to stick to
technical photography issues. I think in the future I'll stick to
posting non-nudes here.
Honestly, I'd hope you wouldn't let the blue noses from stopping you from posting the images you want cc on.
 

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