paulsphotographs
Well-known member
Hello All
My latest effort.
cc respectfully requested.
Regards,
Paul
My latest effort.
cc respectfully requested.
Regards,
Paul
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One cold morning
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ahmami
Senior Member
Hi,
Shame the trees are blocking the view or the capture would have been really nice. Those tracks do look menacing, hope there were no trains coming ....
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regards, Mirza
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Shame the trees are blocking the view or the capture would have been really nice. Those tracks do look menacing, hope there were no trains coming ....
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regards, Mirza
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JustHerCamera
Leading Member
Really cool tracks!! I'd love to see it composed a bit differently to highlight them more. I feel pulled between looking at the "view" (which is a ok view, but not spectacular) or looking at the snow covered tracks. I'd rather be fascinated (perhaps in context to their surroundings) with the tracks and not distracted by the rest.
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Sue
Photography for me isn't about capturing what I see, but about capturing what I feel.
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Sue
Photography for me isn't about capturing what I see, but about capturing what I feel.
paulsphotographs
Well-known member
Thank you Mirza and Sue for your insightful comments. Your feedback is appreciated.
You've given me some good points to think about during my next outing.
Looking at it now I'm thinking the composition isn't great and I think I tried to get too much into the image leaving the eye with no where to rest.
Not to worry though, I don't mind going back and trying again.
Regards,
Paul
You've given me some good points to think about during my next outing.
Looking at it now I'm thinking the composition isn't great and I think I tried to get too much into the image leaving the eye with no where to rest.
Not to worry though, I don't mind going back and trying again.
Regards,
Paul
Minds eye2
Leading Member
I like your shot Paul,it really shows wilderness and makes the viewer feel like they're in the middle of nowhere. I do agree with Sue's comments, but it's still a good shot. Rob
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morris
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All the diagonals make for a great composition Paul. I’m wondering about adding a touch of contrast.
Morris
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KeninDFW
Senior Member
Paul,
You might consider cropping the picture into portrait with the tracks going from the lower left to the upper right. That way you have the interesting tracks and the wonderful light from the trees, without the eye being drawn into the valley.
Just a thought.
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Ken
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You might consider cropping the picture into portrait with the tracks going from the lower left to the upper right. That way you have the interesting tracks and the wonderful light from the trees, without the eye being drawn into the valley.
Just a thought.
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Ken
http://www.pbase.com/kenindfw/galleries
Nikon D300 / 50 1.4 / 80 - 400 / 18 - 200 / 105 2.8 / 24 - 70 2.8 / 14 - 24 2.8
paulsphotographs
Well-known member
Thank you Rob, Morris and Ken
I appreciate your encouragement.
I'll be back in the area to take another shot soon but in the mean time I tried a different crop.
Regards,
Paul
I appreciate your encouragement.
I'll be back in the area to take another shot soon but in the mean time I tried a different crop.
Regards,
Paul
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