Edmond
Congratulations. I loved this short film and found it better than
others I have seen, including LaForet.
That was an excellent short movie. It captured the essence of the
human condition that we are ultimately alone with our possessions
that outlast us and the soundtrack was so evocative of a hidden
sensuousness aqnd longing.
I loved the way you thought through the storyline and each individual
segment, focusing on the key subject in each scene and presumably
shooting on a tripod with focus, white balance and metering set
manually.
The only scenes that did not quite work for me were the bench and
walk towards the camera scene on the embankment and the message on
the phone scene. Focus, which you had done so well in all other
scenes by setting and then having movement without change in focus,
was done differently in the two scenes I have singled out. You tried
to refocus more than once during the movement and that just seemed
unnecessary to me.
This film sold the idea of the DSLR video to me more than anything
thus far.
Thank you for sharing. I will watch it again and again.
--
Busterman