DezM
Veteran Member
Hey John. Gotcha on the first two points. I will work on them later today.I'm pretty much with Alex all the way on these.
I too like the red thing. It is just bright enough without taking
over the image. I like the day to night feel of the sky. I don't like
the pier to the left, by touching the waterline in the background it
is breaking down the overall definition - I'd think raising the
camera about 1 foot would have created the necessary separation.
I don't think the monochrome version gains anything.
Bendy bridge - interesting, but the crops at either side seem too
tight - I'd be happier if the left stanchion plus a bit more were in
shot to the left, and if the other bridge wasn't running straight
into the frame.
First graffiti pic is fine, suits the wide format.
The bend on the bridge is due to distortion and being closer to the left bridge. Perhaps if I centered myself better between the two bridges, the output probably would've come out better.
Thanks!
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Dez
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