i'm really only good at contructive comments so i'll give that (if
DC were here you would get a mouthful, but luckily he's not),
anyway:
Thanks for the comments! I'm sure to try some of the things you mentioned. (won't post the modified ones, but it's great to have your feedback) Who's DC ? Does he post much, I'll try the search functions.
r003100031.html - the mushroom is cute. i would remove a portion of
the background and some of the side because it's a bit distracting.
because that branch shoots off to the right, i'd keep it in,
leaving about 10% of the background. and to keep it symetrical, i'd
keep about 15% on the left side of the shroom. about 25% above,
keeping the rock there.
Yes, I now know... the mushroom is too much into the center of the photo. Actually it was the first macrophoto ever taken by me... (some months ago)
lightgame.html - i'd keep it just that way.
Yeah , I know, it's difficult to change it in any way.... pretty difficult to shoot too.
lake.html - i'd clip about 25% of the leftside right off. the
picture has no real focal point, and the sky isn't all that blue
(maybe a pol?). i'd use the stuff in the water and the tree as a
center. otherwise to me, it looks more like a shot to advance the
film (and there isn't any)...
100% right, this photo was taken exactly going against every basic rule...on purpose though.
(- Try not to focus your object right in the middle
- It's best to have a front-frame...
-etc.)
silhouet.html - i dunno, it doesn't look right to me. but i can't
think of anything different to do. so i'll leave it...
Yep, this picture is strange, but everyone I showed the picture on a print out loved it very much... don't know why either, ... I guess I'm looking at it too technical. Anyway, there's something about this picture.
neverending.html - i'm really not one with black and white. i
perfer color myself. green grass on the side, with white puffy
clouds on a blue background.
airwalker.html - needs a beam of light and a bottom of a UFO.
that's a weird illusion, how is that guy off the ground?
Hehe, yup, it's funny huh?! I got lucky and took the photo at the right moment when the guy passed by. Actually the shadow exists, but is out of the picture... Yes, let's call Mulder.
horse.html - pretty stocky horse... i'd give it a little more
contrast or a pol to remove some of the mist. too bad there's no
way to remove the house wall in the background. i can't think of a
good crop.
What's a pol in english?
secretpool.html - this one is pretty intresting actually. i'd
expect to see a fairy or a deer in there.
Pretty creepy place over there!
Thanks Mike for the constructive comments... I guess you only had a look on the first page, gallery 1, I find the other galleries, 1 & 3 better. If you didn't saw them yet, I'd love your comments on them, you're good at it too!
Take care,
Wim.
