H5 in the Maldives

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Hi,

I've never really been very interested in photography up until about 12 months ago. Finally got rid of my Sony DSC-P72 3.1 MP camera in Novemeber and took the next step. I bought a Sony DSC-H5 and am so impressed with it. Since November I took the camera with me everywhere to learn as much as I could about both the camera and phtoography in preperation for my holiday to the Maldives in January.

Anyway here is a selection of the 500 of so shots I took of one of the most beautiful places in the world

Any comments/tips/advice would be much appreciated:

http://outdoors.webshots.com/album/557297490IHZZfo?start=0

Click on the first image then on the right you'll see the option to view them as a slideshow

Thanks

Chris
 
I would like to include picture #33 in the STF gallery.

And as a print for the wall. If you would send a full resolution image ten" wide, PPed and cropped as you wish.

http://www.pbase.com/kattslackey/stf_members

If interested email the photo(s) to me at

[email protected]

The photograph should be no more than 750pixels wide or 600pixels high.

No frame, include a title and any data you wish. (Location, camera, exif info)

As I may not return to this post do not reply here.I would like to include picture in the STF gallery.

And as a print for the wall. If you would send a full resolution image PPed and cropped as you wish.

http://www.pbase.com/kattslackey/stf_members

If interested email the photo(s) to me at

[email protected]

The photograph should be no more than 750pixels wide or 600pixels high.

No frame, include a title and any data you wish. (Location, camera, exif info)

As I may not return to this post do not reply here.
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Marion

My photos? Steal 'em, abuse 'em, post 'em whatever from the STF website. My studio photos NO, no.

 
Beautiful place, and very nice shots you've got. Some are gorgeous right from the camera, and I wouldn't change a thing. A few of the other shots that I might make suggestions are very editable and post-processable - one of the advantages to the H5's generous resolution is that it gives alot of crop room!

Note: all of my suggestions or advice is not from a professional - just another enthusiast and H5 user like you - all to be taken as just an opinion and another idea to consider.

Anyway...I'll post them by your photo numbers in your gallery:

00175 - I like this one, and wouldn't change anything.

00181 - You might try a crop of this one in a 4x6 ratio...something with a bit less sky, which I think would strengthen the overall composition.

00183 - Great lighting and color. A crop away of some of the upper right or lower right, to move the subject into the upper or lower right third quadrant of the photo might give the composition a bit more pop.
00259 - Very cool!
00477 - I find this an interesting shot, with very good composition.

00549 - The umbrella silhouette is nicely composed, the lighting is very nice...great scene. Only suggestion here would be to mind the horizon...it's just a bit crooked...easily fixed.

00747 - Composition is great. A bit of a tweak to the brightness/contrast could give just a bit more life to the lighting overall...but still quite nice as is.

I could post a few examples of the types of crops and touchups I'm suggesting by downloading a few of your shots, editing them as a sample, and reposting them here...but only with your permission. If you'd like me to post a few of my edits of your photos, please let me know!

Great gallery and a great trip. Hard to get a bad photo in that place - I'd love to see the Maldives before the ocean rises up over them!

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Justin
galleries: http://www.pbase.com/zackiedawg

(I'd be honored and overjoyed to have any of my posted photographs critiqued, commented on, or post-processed - I can attribute everything I know about photography to the wonderful people who have done this for me in the past!)
 
Thanks Justin - I really appreciate your views + advice

Please feel free to download and alter as you see fit

Cheers

Chris
 
Thank you...it's much easier to show what you are trying to say than to type it out.

Here's a few of the samples I tried - these are not necessarily better than yours - just some different ideas on cropping, some minor tweaks to color or contrast, etc. I think they may add interest to some already very nice photos by cropping for different compositions...and you should have plenty of room with your H5 originals to crop down and still have nice prints.

I worked from your 800x600 posted versions...so obviously my crops are significantly smaller than that and the resolution would look much better when cropped from the originals.

1. Flower - your original post



Crop idea:



You could crop out the upper right area, or the lower right area...try them both. But keeping the flower out of the center makes it feel more dynamic for me, and especially if you framed the shadow of the flower too. I also applied a touch of gaussian blur in the background sand just to imply a bit narrower of a focus.

2. huts - your original post



Here's a case where centering the subject works - rule of thirds can be broken. However, while I like the horizontal centering of the pathway, I don't like the vertical centering of the huts as much. The water is so dynamic, and the pathways are interesting, but the sky doesn't add alot for me. A lower camera angle would have been nice...but you still have a great shot here. I would just crop out some sky - try a 3:2 crop for more width.

crop idea



I touched on the contrast a bit, then a touch of saturation to restore the tropical colors.

3. Hut on water - your original post



Again, here I just think that cropping out some sky and moving the hut off the vertical centerline makes it a bit more interesting. I also deepened the blacks a touch and resaturated a bit.

Crop idea



4. Island - your original post



Here again, the sky could be cropped a bit...and also the contrast felt like it could use a touch of boost. Most cameras in such sunny, bright conditions filled with blues and greens can lose their black level a bit, and end up feeling almost like being viewed through a slightly opaque window. For me, playing with the levels and bringing back some of the depth to the blacks makes it look more lively and vibrant.

Crop idea



Just a few ideas to consider. I really like your photos, and you've got alot of very nice ones posted that are beautifully composed, lit and colored. I think sometimes you tend to default back to centering subjects when not really thinking about it - but clearly you can compose in thirds because you've done it with a few. And again, sometimes centering works - rule of thirds be darned.

Retouching can be awfully personal - what looks good to me may not to someone else. But I've always found that seeing different people's vision of what works for them helps by either revealing improvements to my originals, or strengthening my confidence that my original choice was correct.

Hope these help in either way!

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Justin
galleries: http://www.pbase.com/zackiedawg

(I'd be honored and overjoyed to have any of my posted photographs critiqued, commented on, or post-processed - I can attribute everything I know about photography to the wonderful people who have done this for me in the past!)
 
Chris, relly enjoyed your shots of Maldives, very evocative for me as I was on a similar Island 3 years ago, 11 months before the tsunami hit it. Left you a couple of messages on ws. Eric
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ey
 
Thanks for sharing these wonderful images. I particularly enjoyed the sunset shots. And what is that little animal with wings? He's not a bat. What did you put your camera in for the under water shots? Great series.
 
He most certainly is a bat:



Fruit bat in fact. At about 18:30 each evening they flew over from a neighbouring island right over the sunset beach. It was only when i tried to take a shot of the "birds" that i realised that they were bats! Approx 1m wing span. i caught this guy just after he landed (upsidedown) on a branch near the pool area.

Thank you Justin for taking the time to retouch and crop some of the images - It has given me an urge to trawl through the 100s of images that i have taken since November and see what i can do with them.

The underwater shots in the series were taken using my old 3 MP cybershot camera (as i certainly wouldn't risk the H5) in an Aquapac. Basically it is a glorified sandwich bag that is waterproof down to 5m. It only cost about £20 and I was very impressed with the results.
 
Sorry - i don't know what/how to embed an image - please explain?!
I'm new to this
Many members (myself included) just breeze on by a post if the images are linked and not embedded (too lazy in my case). I've timed it, and an embedded image has about 1/2 second to appeal to me when I scan a post. Links usually don't even get clicked on.

Here's how dpreview describes the process of embedding, in the "Rules/Help" section...

http://forums.dpreview.com/forums/rules.asp?forum=1009

So simply copy the URL from the address line at the top of your browser, and paste it into your post, then add .jpg to the end.
R2

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You are free to offer critique of any of my images.
Editing and reposting them on this forum is permitted, and even encouraged.

http://www.pbase.com/jekyll_and_hyde/galleries
 
Where the picture is visible right in the post itself. (I embedded 4 of his pics, plus my edits of them, in my post above in case anyone wants to quickly see 4 of his pics embedded!).

I had reposted your shots to my gallery...then I just copied the URLs, pasted into the message, added .jpg to the end, and voila! You can see the pics right in the post.

If you have alot of pictures, usually a nice idea is to embed 4-6 of them, then provide a gallery link to see the rest.

Thanks again for the opportunity to play around with a few of your beautiful shots and make suggestions!

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Justin
galleries: http://www.pbase.com/zackiedawg

(I'd be honored and overjoyed to have any of my posted photographs critiqued, commented on, or post-processed - I can attribute everything I know about photography to the wonderful people who have done this for me in the past!)
 
Thanks Chris for that aquapac link, wish I had known about them when I went to Maldives. 20 pounds is a lot better price than the 5 disposables I used + D&P = around 60 pounds & more images on my little Olympus to boot! Eric
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ey
 
Thanks R2 - You are right a couple of pictures embedded to let people see the style of the pictures and then the rest linked would have been the best bet.

Here are a few of the shots taken using the aquapac:







Taken using my old DSC-P72
 

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