Elvira: C&C please! [2]

Please comment on the results of my yesterday's photoshooting!





10 more can be seen at http://www.datzinger.net/portfolio/people/20060910_elvira

D70+Tamron 28-75/2.8 @ f5.6. First location (underground car park): 1 SB-600 with supplied fluorescent filter and fluorescent tubes illuminating the background, 1 SB-800 (master, connected to camera via SC-29 - the AF illuminator was invaluable) with a huge white reflective umbrella to the left and a highly placed SB-600 with a small silver reflective umrella to the right, both with warming filters applied. Two lightdiscs as a fill for the lower half of her body. WB set to tungsten with a slightly cool tint. Second location: Same as above except for the flourescent-filtered SB-600, which I could do without, obviously, and a warmer WB setting. On both series, the backgrounds are burnt in (but also desaturated) slightly.

Kind regards,
Martin

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I know, forbidden, yadda yadda. If I get banned because of this, so be it.

But heck I've put about 8 hours work into these and if they just got overlooked because I posted them at the wrong time of the day or nobody thinks they are worth one word or line of comment, I'm really honestly plssed off and this will be for shure my last post here (I don't quite get what sort of posts gather interest around here and which not in the last time anyway. It appears to me, the less stupid or the more the author was honestly trying to contribute, the less responses and vice versa.). Honestly sorry for venting, I'll get under one freaking cold shower now.

Of course I also posted this for creating traffic on my (completely non-commercial) site, but who out of the majority with an URL in his signature doesn't? So, bash the pics, teach me what I could've done better, or just tell me this is the wrong forum, please. Maybe you even like something about them, then just let me know. I don't want or need slaps on my shoulder, critique is what I'm looking for. Else I think I really have to apologise to the model for wasting her time.

Here are 2 more out of the series:





Kind regards,
Martin

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nice work, really! as usuall! You've got nice model, and colours are so natural....great

--Agree with lookeye on this........

Some good shots there..

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Regards

DLt

Nice photos .. can I borrow elvira ..
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She's not my property, but she isn't quite averse to having her picture taken. But guess who is eager to do this for the next few times!

Kind regards,
Martin

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Very nice to see the first response to be positive ones!

Kind regards,
Martin

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Maybe SWMBA,,
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Sorry, I didn't quite get that!

Kind regards,
Martin

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SWMBA= She Who Must Be Adored..the wife or girlfriend or your partner

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your pix and model are very fine, the model ELVIRA looks a little bit sad . A litlle bit more "cheeeeeees" and the pic will be perfect!

Nope, none of these. But I'm glad she was my model for a couple of hours.

Kind regards,
Martin

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There are a few smiles in the 250 or so pictures I've taken, but these just worked best for me.

Kind regards,
Martin

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where are thie pics? give us the url, i wanna see your model similing... the life is much simple with a smile on the face , and pictures are brighter