Please Critique My 2 Photos

Posting the exif would be helpful. Imwondering what shutterspeed and f/stop. when shooting people shots select a focus point (like center) focus on the eyes recompose and shoot. The photo looks soft probably due to use of multipoint focus. Also look at parts in hair and find an angle that doesnt show it so much. Hope that helps. gotta run maybe more later.

shallowDOF
 
Those our tough shots with what looks like mid day sun. The first came out OK because you had less sky to mess up the exposure. The second is nearly impossible because of the amount of sky, the rocks/woman are way underexposed and it's tough to bring out the detail without a lot of noise as you got.

What do you use for PP? My first suggestion with shots like these is to not have so much sky in the background. Second would be to bracket your exposure and see if I better option is there. Lastly, I would take the bracketed shots and combine them in Photoshop using shots properly exposed for sky and subject.

Hope that helps.
 
I was just coming back to add that. Though I'm not sure how close you are so it depends on whether or not you are in flash range.
 
Here is 10 seconds work in Photoshop Elements...

I did an Enhance

and a local contrast enchancement with an Unsharp Mask of 20/20/0:

The change brightened the foreground without blowing out the sky...

 
Just a Newbie, had xt for 2 weeks just getting used to it. Please
critique my photos and post processing. What did I do wrong with
the second photo? These are my first 2 photos for you to check
I need lots of help from you wonderful people.
Thank in advance
http://www.beefcakestation.com/ourphotos.htm

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Canon Rebel XT - Kit Lense
Canon A75
Minolta Dimage X
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Canon Rebel XT - Kit Lense
Canon A75
Minolta Dimage X
 
It's stored with the image. Here it is for your photo that I processed for you:

Date/Time 24-Jun-2005 03:38:09
Make Canon
Model Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
Flash Used No
Focal Length 47 mm
Exposure Time 1/500 sec
Aperture f/8
ISO Equivalent 100
Exposure Bias
White Balance (-1)
Metering Mode average (1)
JPEG Quality basic (1)
Exposure Program aperture priority (3)
Focus Distance

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would it be possibe for you to email me the new copy of the picture 600x800?
It's stored with the image. Here it is for your photo that I
processed for you:

Date/Time 24-Jun-2005 03:38:09
Make Canon
Model Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
Flash Used No
Focal Length 47 mm
Exposure Time 1/500 sec
Aperture f/8
ISO Equivalent 100
Exposure Bias
White Balance (-1)
Metering Mode average (1)
JPEG Quality basic (1)
Exposure Program aperture priority (3)
Focus Distance

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http://PBase.com/Sayer
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Canon Rebel XT - Kit Lense
Canon A75
Minolta Dimage X
 
would it be possibe for you to email me the new copy of the picture 600x800?
Here is 10 seconds work in Photoshop Elements...

I did an Enhance
flash)

and a local contrast enchancement with an Unsharp Mask of 20/20/0:

The change brightened the foreground without blowing out the sky...

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Canon Rebel XT - Kit Lense
Canon A75
Minolta Dimage X
 
I had to upload it to my Pbase account so that I could post it here. Just right click on it and save it. So, you like the post processing I did on it? I started over with your raw file, converted it wit RawShooter Eseentials and then did a levels adjustment, a very fine unsharp mask, and then upped the color saturation a bit.

It's not 800x600 but 800x533 since that is the native ratio fro the XT. Did not want to crop your image. :)
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Mike, is your goal to screw around with computers for hours fixing bad photos, or learnign to take good photos in the first place?

This forum is ful of the former-- shoot in RAW, badly, and then try to fix things.

Assuming you want to take good pictures...

Learn to look at the light, and at your subjects, and do some thinking.

In the first shot, simply look at her. Elbows are causing shadows, sun is very bright in spots, shadows are dark in spots. You can't even see her face with your eyes, can you? It's too dark in real life.

Now, of you go back to the same spot, make a little tube with your fingrs, and look through it at her face. She'll look much brighter. Take away the tube, and her face goes dark. What's happening is your eyes are actinglike the aperture in your camera.

Your best bet to fix the photo situation is to get rid of the harsh shadows. The two ways to do this are to add more light to brighten the shadows, or reduce the brightness of the sun.

The first is easier, by using some sort of reflector, or fill flash.

The second is possible by holding a large translucent sheet of something --cloth, plastic, window screening -- so it blocks some of the sun.

Or, more sensibly, move her.

For the second shot, you've got a similr problem. Subject is int he dark, background is too bright.

Hard to fix, but the same reflector or fill flash would help.

Or move in close with the camra onmanual, take a meter reading of her face, back away, and take the shot. Her face -- which is what mattrs -- will be fine. Sky will be too light, but that's unavoidabvle, without using flash to brghten the face.

Polarizer would help a bit in holding the sky blue when you open the aperture to get the face exposed properly.

Even light makes nicer pictures, within reason.

BAK
 
thanks for the info, sorry I am just learning at this time I am not a pro like yourself. I am quite sure your first pictures were not perfect.
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Canon Rebel XT - Kit Lense
Canon A75
Minolta Dimage X
 
I'm with you on that. The important thing to me is the end result. If at first you need to rely on a little extra post processing to get the result you want, while you learn better technique than so be it! :)

Don't let anyone shame the joy out of this for you.
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