Motor Bike

RayGuselli said:

Hi all,

One of the last shots taken with my brilliant Fuji 602 before
parting with it for my D70.

Did some out of bounds and motion blur for a bit of fun.

Just thought you might like to see - yes, I know, she should have
been wearing a crash helmet at that speed!!! Hope you like and
would welcome any feedback please.

Thanks

Ray

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RayGuselli said:

Hi all,

One of the last shots taken with my brilliant Fuji 602 before
parting with it for my D70.

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RayGuselli said:

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shudder said:

RayGuselli said:

Hi all,

One of the last shots taken with my brilliant Fuji 602 before
parting with it for my D70.

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Ray --

I like the out of bounds work. That's cool (and creatively
off-center). The blurring would work better if you really got in
there and made sure the blur was all the way up against her and the
bike as the way it is now, she's got spikes of sharpness all around
here and it would be better if it was all blurry. My two
centavos...

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shudder said:

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best,
shudder

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shudder said:

PIX: http://www.mmcphoto.com
MIX: http://www.artistlaunch.com/mmc
Get the SDD*: http://www.mmcphoto.com

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RayGuselli said:

shudder said:

RayGuselli said:

Hi all,

One of the last shots taken with my brilliant Fuji 602 before
parting with it for my D70.

Click to expand...

Ray --

I like the out of bounds work. That's cool (and creatively
off-center). The blurring would work better if you really got in
there and made sure the blur was all the way up against her and the
bike as the way it is now, she's got spikes of sharpness all around
here and it would be better if it was all blurry. My two
centavos...

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Many thanks for the comments,

The bike is my nephews - didn't know it is a good one!

Re the blurring; yes, you are right and the same comment has been
made in the retouching forum.

I have been told how to improve on that and am going to try tonight
when I get home from work.

Many thanks though for your help.

Ray

RayGuselli said:

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best,
shudder

RayGuselli said:

RayGuselli said:

RayGuselli said:

PIX: http://www.mmcphoto.com
MIX: http://www.artistlaunch.com/mmc
Get the SDD*: http://www.mmcphoto.com

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