Mike Wright
Senior Member
I tend to prefer that profile shots have more space in "front" of the subject than behind it....the composition.
Assuming that the picture you've posted is a crop of the original,
I'm just suggesting that the crop should show some more space in
front (to the left) of the spider and a little less to the left.
As I can see, looking at you PBase-gallery, you almost allways
place the object of interest in the center of the frame. Sometimes
the picture is more pleasing/interesting to the viewer if the
object of interest is placed off-center. And I think the
spider-macro would be more pleasing to look at if the spider was
placed a little more to the right in the frame.
The original post isn't too bad in that respect, but the second is much better. I think it's a kind of psychological element--as though the subject is really present in the frame--where i am, too--rather than staring off at something to one side and ignoring me.
Of course, sometimes the opposite approach may be just what you want, but in the majority of cases, I find it more pleasing--more relaxing, actually--to have more space in front of the subject.
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Mike Wright
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