European Kingfisher

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Orsonneke
Orsonneke Contributing Member • Posts: 519
European Kingfisher
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Comment & critique:
Please provide me constructive critique and criticism.
LesPickstock Contributing Member • Posts: 514
Re: European Kingfisher
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Despite ‘breaking rules’ (eg facing out) I think this is a lovely image (though it suggests it is from a ‘setup’ due to that very clean branch and lighting).

Irrespective I think super

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LesP

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Re: European Kingfisher

Cracking shot!

Since you've asked for critique, there are a few things I'd be tempted to tweak slightly. Firstly it seems slightly oversharpened, so consider dialling the sharpening back a bit. The colour balance feels slightly green tinted, so think about shifting the tint towards magenta a bit. Finally I think I might be tempted to crop a little off the left.

Those are only minor nits though; it's an excellent shot of a very flighty bird - well done

Erwann Loison Contributing Member • Posts: 511
Re: European Kingfisher

It's a technically really good shot but it somehow bothers me that the bird is in the middle of the frame with the beak "leaking" into the right half. I would have cropped/framed so there is space on the right for the bird to 'look at'. Maybe just habits...

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