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lots to learn..............

Started Nov 4, 2016 | Photos
CarL1650 New Member • Posts: 12
lots to learn..............
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olympus em1; 40-150mm pro+1.4

olympus em1; 300mm pro

olympus em1; 300mm pro

olympus em1; 300mm pro

Comment & critique:
Please provide me constructive critique and criticism.
Olympus 40-150mm F2.8 Pro Olympus E-M1
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Jakob Malm
Jakob Malm Regular Member • Posts: 392
Re: lots to learn..............

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

robonrome
robonrome Senior Member • Posts: 2,334
Re: lots to learn..............

Not so much to learn methinks... exposure and composition spot on! V nice

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mg_k Veteran Member • Posts: 3,221
Re: lots to learn..............

Shaky and oof.

Background is creamy thou.

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OP CarL1650 New Member • Posts: 12
Re: lots to learn..............

Thank you for viewing!

MatLD Regular Member • Posts: 491
Some comments from a non-macro guy.

Hi, thanks for sharing.

I know nothing of macro on insects, so take my comments with a grain of salt.

Beautiful colors and pictures, I like most 3 and 4 but I can see some improvements for my taste:

1,2 and 3 : even closer framing would be better. The background is distracting and a little busy.

1, 2 and 4 : the wings are out of focus or show motion blur, I would try to have them sharp.

1 has foreground leaf  distracting, out of focus and hiding the flower.

2 and 3 have too much background on the left side,

4 maybe too much empty space on the right side.

LMNCT Veteran Member • Posts: 4,908
Re: lots to learn..............

Carl, you are a quick learner.  Lovely image separation.

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OP CarL1650 New Member • Posts: 12
Re: Some comments from a non-macro guy.

Thanks for your comments!

OP CarL1650 New Member • Posts: 12
Re: lots to learn..............

Thanks!

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