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local woods after rain

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Kevin Stephens Regular Member • Posts: 193
local woods after rain
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First day out with my new K-S2 and my old 16-45mm

Comment & critique:
Please provide me constructive critique and criticism.
GossCTP Veteran Member • Posts: 6,207
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I like it. Have you tried a b/w conversion?

How does the 16-45 handle on the K-S2?

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OP Kevin Stephens Regular Member • Posts: 193
I forgot to post full size:
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Joseph Tainter Forum Pro • Posts: 11,494
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This is a hard scene to capture, but you've done it nicely.

Joe

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KL Matt Veteran Member • Posts: 5,999
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Hi Kevin,

Nice shot! The first thing I thought was wow, gorgeous light. You probably didn't even need to process this very much. Seeing the light is the biggest part of photography IMO, and you've done that well here.

I like that the foreground trees are in shadow, but no so extreme that they are simply black -- the light shining through the foreground trees upper right gives them a nice transluscent and vivid green.

What I would do different is the composition. The large tree trunks in the middle and right third of the image are big dark areas that the eye wants to look past, look into the light. But the brightest light in the frame is in a strange position, down to the lower left some how. Instead of framing that beautiful light and drawing attention to it, those trees seem to be obstructing our view. I would have put the large dark tree in the middle of the frame off center and probably cut off one of the two on the right (used it more as a framing device and less as a central foreground element) here. I also probably would have used portrait orientation to catch more of that gorgeous transluscence of the sunlight penetrating those leaves, also making it easier for me to use the tree trunks as framelines left and right instead of bars screening our view into the light.

Hope that helps,

Matt

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Cane Veteran Member • Posts: 6,900
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Wow. Love it.

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John Michael Winterbourne Veteran Member • Posts: 3,174
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I like the shot a lot - so much so that it leaves me wanting more. Not in the sense of wanting more out of this particular capture, good as it is. Having said that, I don't agree with KL Matt's original comment about the near-silhouette darkness of the trees in the foreground - my monitor probably needs calibration fine tuning, but to me the trunks leave me wanting either a good deal more shadow detail, or none at all - go pure black.

No, I just want more shots to tell me a fuller story about this particular clearing in the woods..... and as they're local to you, you should be able to oblige And I should also add that I don't really go along with the dictum that every picture must tell a story. It's just that this image left me very quickly with the feeling that it could be just one in a much wider series.

I need to declare my specialist interest here. I'm a forester, working for Forestry Commission England in the Welsh Marches, and I wish I had a beech wood like this one on my doorstep - or at least one I could call "local". The nearest I have are in the Forest of Dean, a couple of hours away.

The first things I spotted in your full size version were the stumps of the felled trees, which reveal that this is a fairly recent (couple or three years ago, not much longer I think) felling coupe - forestry jargon for what happened to create the opening in the canopy which provided your wonderful light.

Things I have been thinking about, in no particular order:

  • Did you see the light coming into the clearing from some distance away? Could you give a shot with what you've presented just as a small proportion, showing something mysterious (not very clear what) away off in the dark and gloomy wood.... Intriguing - let's go have a closer look...
  • It's now July. This is a beech wood. For a short period, a couple of weeks after the buds burst, beech leaves are wonderfully translucent. You might have to wait 9 or 10 months to capture that. And if you're lucky, that coupe will be a riot of bluebells.  If there were any this year, they're long gone.
  • Get into the felled area. It wasn't felled just for fun, it was probably a regeneration coupe - macro possibilities for young beech seedlings?
  • Winter?

One of my favourite serious picture books is called "The secret life of an oak wood". I'm not aware of an equivalent "secret life of a beech wood".

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OP Kevin Stephens Regular Member • Posts: 193
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John

Many thanks for your kind comments and observations.  The location is Greno Wood just on the northern edge of Sheffield; it is managed by the Wildlife Trust of Sheffield and Rotherham.  We are lucky enough to have this on our doorstep and walk our dog there; I will be sure to try and build a up a portfolio.  I also know the Welsh Marches having been brought up in Church Stretton and gone to school at Ludlow.

Larry Buck Senior Member • Posts: 1,061
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I miss my DA 16-45.

Well done, as has been said, with challenging lighting conditions.

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GossCTP Veteran Member • Posts: 6,207
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Larry Buck wrote:

I miss my DA 16-45.

What was your reason for parting with it? I've thought about trying to change up that part of my kit before, but I find that it just works for me most of the time. I feel I have a pretty good copy, though I don't have a body above 16mp.

btw, secondhand copies of that lens go pretty cheap now.

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It was stolen actually. I now have the 18-135 which almost as good but I miss the extra 2mm at times.

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what a beautiful picture!!!!

I love it just as it is

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GossCTP Veteran Member • Posts: 6,207
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Larry Buck wrote:

It was stolen actually.

I think I remember a thread on that - didn't they take most of your kit?

I now have the 18-135 which almost as good but I miss the extra 2mm at times.

I'm pretty fond of of the wider normal zooms. One of the big hopes I had for mirrorless was that someone would make a 14-55 f/4 zoom for an APS-C mount. Instead the biggest innovation has been a 16-50 f/2-2.8.

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JasonS70 Contributing Member • Posts: 654
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That is a nice photo Kevin.

How are you finding the KS2, I have not seen much about on the shooting experience and image quality from normal users. I almost went with the KS2 and sigma 30mm when I busted my K30, which was covered under insurance. But I went a bit left of field and picked up a Sigma DP2Q instead. Not sure about my choice now, I think the Sigma is a bit beyond my abilities.

Cheers

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OP Kevin Stephens Regular Member • Posts: 193
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I'm very pleased with it Jason, having moved up from my old K10D. I was tempted by a K3ii but went for the K-S2 because I don't need the extra autofocus capabilities and the KS-2 is a lot more compact despite being weather sealed.. As you can see from the upload the metering and IQ is just perfect.

capturef22 Veteran Member • Posts: 3,578
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Awesome; you nailed it! I can feel the mugginess in that image and love the various shades of green.

Thanks for posting.

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