A model up for CC.

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C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
A model up for CC.

Instead of complaining about which camera is here and which camera is not here, I decided to go and shoot. LOL. Here is recent shoot wiht the beautiful Lakendra. Let me know what you think.

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Bright Angel Veteran Member • Posts: 4,854
Re: A model up for CC.

Very nice

CC: I would crop off the bright area of the wall on the left hand side and also the bright wall and grass on the right hand side.

DezM
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Re: A model up for CC.

She is beautiful. I don't have a problem with Mark's distractions. They kind of 'frame' her but the black objects in the far background detract a little.
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OP C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
Re: A model up for CC.

Bright Angel wrote:

Very nice

CC: I would crop off the bright area of the wall on the left hand side and also the bright wall and grass on the right hand side.

Thanks for cc. I thought the wall was sorta distracting. I guess I had to hear it from someone else. Thanks again!

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JusLookN Veteran Member • Posts: 4,267
Re: A model up for CC.

I'm with Dez on this one! I can live with the shot as is; except for the black images in the background. Very good shot,though! Beautiful model!
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comoxbrit Contributing Member • Posts: 761
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Correct me if I am wrong, but if you had used a D800 the black objects would not be there!!??? LOL having a joke. Great model and I agree with the cropping on the right hand side.
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OP C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
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JusLookN wrote:

I'm with Dez on this one! I can live with the shot as is; except for the black images in the background. Very good shot,though! Beautiful model!
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Thanks Glenn and Dez!! I really appreciate your CC!

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OP C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
Re: A model up for CC.

comoxbrit wrote:

Correct me if I am wrong, but if you had used a D800 the black objects would not be there!!??? LOL having a joke. Great model and I agree with the cropping on the right hand side.
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Thanks and I'm working on the D800 LOL

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William Baburchak Regular Member • Posts: 120
Re: A model up for CC.

Very Nice!

The only thing I would do is turn the camera to portrait orientation and get those beautiful legs in the picture!!

Bill

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Hansa Yindee
Hansa Yindee Veteran Member • Posts: 4,179
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Certainly a beautiful model and you must have shot many frames.
I too agree with a little bit of cropping but that is your choice...;-)
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DRode
DRode Senior Member • Posts: 2,815
Re: A model up for CC.

Beautiful shot. The model is gorgeous and the pose and composition work well. I agree that the black objects in the background are slightly distracting. I'd clone them out but it's a minor thing.

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Mannypr Veteran Member • Posts: 3,363
Re: A model up for CC.

If the model is up for CC , well , what can I say but perfect . If it's the photo your refering about the left side is a bit distracting but a minor thing . Being the model so beautiful it's hard to be distracted as the eyes go straight towards her.

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OP C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
Re: A model up for CC.

William Baburchak wrote:

Very Nice!

The only thing I would do is turn the camera to portrait orientation and get those beautiful legs in the picture!!

Bill

Thanks Bill! I do have a few that I composed in portrait orientation. I will edit a few more before I present them to her. Thanks again

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OP C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
Re: A model up for CC.

Hansa Yindee wrote:

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Certainly a beautiful model and you must have shot many frames.
I too agree with a little bit of cropping but that is your choice...;-)
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Thanks Jon

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OP C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
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DRode wrote:

Beautiful shot. The model is gorgeous and the pose and composition work well. I agree that the black objects in the background are slightly distracting. I'd clone them out but it's a minor thing.

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OP C-GREEN Regular Member • Posts: 389
Re: A model up for CC.

Mannypr wrote:

If the model is up for CC , well , what can I say but perfect . If it's the photo your refering about the left side is a bit distracting but a minor thing . Being the model so beautiful it's hard to be distracted as the eyes go straight towards her.

Thanks Manny, and the photo is up for CC. LOL

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Michel F Senior Member • Posts: 2,017
Re: A model up for CC.

Nice model, nice pose and lighting. I wonder if a vertical crop would have been better (in the sense of putting more emphasis on the model). Have more ???

C-GREEN wrote:

Instead of complaining about which camera is here and which camera is not here, I decided to go and shoot. LOL. Here is recent shoot wiht the beautiful Lakendra. Let me know what you think.

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REBlue Senior Member • Posts: 2,079
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I agree that I would get rid of what looks like a golf course ball washer and trash can in the background and maybe the very front of the wall, or at least darken it a bit.
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LAHJ Contributing Member • Posts: 787
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Very nice, beautiful model.
But I would have cropped the green part out.

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