FCB Submission

Started Jan 2, 2004 | Discussions thread
OP Fox67 Veteran Member • Posts: 3,441
FCB Submission Matreshka Attempt #2

Uncle Frank,

I am pleased to submit my work again, after more than 1 hour of postprocessing. I followed your advice by slightly lighten the background but I also did some improvement on the dolls themsleves from the RAW file.

Thanks this work, I admit that the result is by far better (thank you for your advice !)

Awaiting for your sentence !

Pascal

Here is the result :

wrote:

I'm sorry I didn't see your submission sooner, Pascal. It's a
wonderful composition, and one that will surely please the
Committee... after a bit of processing. In its current state, the
dark portions of the heads of the 1st and 2nd doll are drawn into
the background. I think this could be avoided by changing the
background color. As well, there is a block of differentiated
shade across the bottom of the frame that mars the appearance of
the background. A little more time in the darkroom, and you should
be able to overcome both of these problems.
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Warm regards and Happy Holidays,
Uncle Frank, FCAS Charter Member,
Hummingbird Hunter, DPR/NTF Supporter
Coolpix fifty seven hundred and nine ninety five
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