What can I improve in these photos?

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What can I improve in these photos?
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Hi all, I am new to this forum. In fact, I am a beginner in photography who just picked up my first mirrorless camera and lens (Fuji XE4 + XF 35mm F2) four weeks ago. I have shot quite a lot of photos regularly (in different genre and style) and it would be awesome if you guys can give me some feedback on these two photos that I think they are my best so far.

I shot in raw + jpeg and did the post-processing in Capture One Express. The jpegs are included for comparison. I am curious about what can I improve in terms of composition, colors, light, post-processing, etc.

Thanks in advance!

Processed raw

Processed raw

Jpeg with Classic Negative Fujifilm film simulation

Jpeg with Acros film simulation

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