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Girl, Toledo, Spain

Started Oct 25, 2021 | Photos thread
EOS GUY
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Re: Girl, Toledo, Spain
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YWG wrote:

Nice composition, it has motion, directionality, geometry. I find it a little too hot in the lit wall which makes the eye wander a bit until getting to the girl. Perhaps more differentiation in the sign shades

Yes you're right there, the wall is a bit too bright and the shadow would print better darker.  I wanted to keep it lighter to suit how young and innocent the girl is but end of the day tonality IS important, so toned down the HL and dragged the shadow a little

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