Summer Photoshoot with a Friend (Comments and Critiques Welcomed)

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Barry Duggan Photography
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Re: Summer Photoshoot with a Friend (Comments and Critiques Welcomed)
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iKokomo wrote:

Thank you all for your comments! I will definitely work on my Speedlight techniques! Here is one more from this series that I forgot to post! Please feel free to comment and critique a black and white photo.

A lot better, but the flash is still too strong. You want to have graduation in the skin tones. Look at her legs and arms for example. The strong flash has also cast hard shadows .

I think if you work on the balance of your light sources you will see a big improvement.

I would recommend researching about lighting patterns and how to create them. Its very interesting and information you will have for life.

Keep up the good work.

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