FCAS App... Tulip pic

Started Oct 21, 2003 | Discussions thread
OP Camare Contributing Member • Posts: 611
Re: Mary, a few small things

Todd Art wrote:

Your picture is nice. I tried to look at it with the "how could
she make it better" eye.

1. The top petal touching the border is a bit awkward. If it was
cropped a bit less so the petal was ALMOST touching it would create
an interesting tension and make the composition even better.

2. The center doesn't appear to be crisp. This may be just me,
but it looks to me like your camera focused on the petals more than
the pistil/stamen.

These are two minor things.

Actually it wasn't cropped at the top, it was touching when I framed it. I did take a second one that was framed a little differently -- more background around it. I'll attach that one now, and I'll try a some more editing of the first one and see what I can come up with. I'll post the results when I get them.

Thanks for the input.

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