Kindly Comment

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nevada5
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I can do that

I'll comment kindly first.  I like the composition, as a documentary-style image.  Shows the bird in just the environment you'd expect to see him.  Nothing at all wrong with that.

The not-necessarily-kindly comment I have is that the focus seems to be on the bird's lower body.  Naturally, I've been told for so long that the eye must be sharp - the point of focus - so I just look there first.  So.... I would say that's where improvement could be made next time.  I didn't see any exif data, so maybe stopping down the lens would bring the eye in focus as well as the body.

Good job.

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