sorry to sound harsh but it appears nothing is in focus, we can’t even know if this was actually taken with a Nikon P1000 , what focal length or settings where used for us to give you some helpful feedback.
We all have different tastes. I might have done this differently, both in terms of composition and in terms of the amount of HDR, or no HDR. But I didn't do the photography. You get to decide what pleases you