What would you do to improve this photo?

Started Sep 19, 2018 | Photos thread
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jakey217350 Contributing Member • Posts: 520
What would you do to improve this photo?
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I've uploaded the original RAW shot and the same shot processed in LR. I used spot metering for exposure. Nikon D750 with Nikkor 85mm 1.4 (photo at f1.8).

 jakey217350's gear list:jakey217350's gear list
Pentax K-5 II Nikon D750 Nikon D500 Nikon AF-S DX Nikkor 35mm F1.8G Nikon AF Nikkor 85mm f/1.4D +11 more
Comment & critique:
Please provide me constructive critique and criticism.
Nikon D750
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