Feedback welcome - Portrait test 1

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PistonPhotoUK
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Feedback welcome - Portrait test 1

So with a bit of spare time I thought I would try out my new to me Zuiko 14-35 F2 lens. Without a friend to pester (and the GF at work) I figured I would grab the tripod, download the remote control app and try being in front of the camera myself for a change.

I'm chuffed with the results as there was little to no real effort behind the shot. Mild editing in Lightroom only.

What are your thoughts? Any critique on composition, editing etc would be appreciated. If you have comments on my 'modelling' then feel free to share, if there is a more appealing way to test new kit I'd love to hear it.

 PistonPhotoUK's gear list:PistonPhotoUK's gear list
Olympus E-M1 Sigma 70-200mm F2.8 EX DG Macro HSM II Olympus Zuiko Digital ED 14-35mm 1:2.0 SWD Olympus 30mm F3.5 Macro
Comment & critique:
Please provide me constructive critique and criticism.
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