Model Not happy with Pictures (I'm Amateur)

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WhereTheHighwayEnds
WhereTheHighwayEnds Junior Member • Posts: 26
Model Not happy with Pictures (I'm Amateur)

Hey,

I've just started practicing doing portraits, I had a local girl pose for me as I practiced a few shots. She isn't happy with the result. I am looking for some feedback from some experienced photographers about what I'm doing wrong.

I'll share a dropbox folder with some of the edited shots as well as a raw image.

Any Feedback is great appreciated!

Thanks

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/rj1gbvxecfhn9ox/AAD-xucc3xiL8F8tNLUi5ACka?dl=0

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