captura
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Nothing much wrong here other than perhaps your selection of f2.8. (wide open.) For more 'punch' if you will, you could have tried EV -1/3, "VIVID" coloration setting, and in strong contrast situations (not here) using DRO. But all of that is up to you, it's whatever effect you like. It's still a nice snapshot.
Not much bokeh with the S. 30; the Z. 32 or the E 35 would have more bokeh.
