First Pics with X_E1

Started Apr 26, 2014 | Discussions thread
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joseluisherranz OP Contributing Member • Posts: 549
Re: First Pics with X_E1

Van du Nord wrote:

Hi Jose,

nice pictures, good start.

You ask some comments on composition. What I think about portrait number two as well as the accordeon player is that these pictures are centered. For me, here is no composition, this is shooting. Especially the ladies portrait, the head is given like the trophy of a hunter, or a soldier. As the lady is turned a little to the right, she should be a little in the left part of the image in order to open the image. And she is a too close, you "cut" her neck by shooting horizontally. Even if the eyes are beautiful and sharp, I would not keep this picture in my album.

The panoramic composition is good, the lady looks into the good direction and "opens" the panorama.


You are probably right in almost everything. You don´t need to keep the photo in your album.

But I will !!

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