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First shoot with NX30 kit lens + 45mm f1.8

Started Apr 1, 2014 | Photos thread
viking79
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Re: First shoot with NX30 kit lens + 45mm f1.8

ClaphamWolf wrote:

Great shots!

Since you asked for CC I will give some (don't take personally and feel free to disagree, just friendly suggestions):

I like the processing fine on the portraits, I like the colors.  However, try not to crop so close to the head.  Maybe take a big step back.

I find the watch shot a little bland, the reflection over the 8 is a bit distracting.  It is a fine shot, just not that interesting.

The bus has some dead space in the upper right that doesn't really add much interest in the shot, so maybe pulling the camera down and to the left would help.

The last portrait, love his expression, nice depth of field.  Just watch the hair.

Thanks for sharing,

Eric

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