Dreamy girl B/W

Started Nov 11, 2013 | Photos thread
OP peckinpah Regular Member • Posts: 206
Re: Dreamy girl B/W

Nice side lighting from a window or door. White wall on her right side gives nice fill so there are no harsh shadows. But she is too close to that wall, making that large shadow visible and very distracting. The pose is not dreamy to me. She looks like she does not want her picture taken. There is no interest or expression in her face and her eyes are nearly closed.

Thank you. I left the shadow in because I liked it as a reflection of her mood. Goes to show that what I think is there isn't necessarly felt by someone else..! I appreciate your thoughts, makes me try harder.

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