6D and 85mm f/1,8

Started May 6, 2013 | Discussions thread
fyngyrz Senior Member • Posts: 1,569
Two things

First, the crop is just a little too tight; a little more room on the feet at least, and I'd go for a little more on the head, too.

Second, the legs are very awkward. She looks like a duck, sitting there with her legs mashed together at the top and spread out at the bottom. Almost anything would be better; crossed legs, legs together but crossed at the ankles, tilted a little to one side; something that communicates "feminine" instead of "hip dysplasia."

PS - I agree with the others. The composition is fine; you broke most of the rules, but it worked, minus the above two things, IMHO. And that *is* just my opinion. Take it or leave it.

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