Did a photoshoot today, can someone critique me?

Started Feb 22, 2013 | Discussions thread
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Cameranoobie Senior Member • Posts: 2,631
Did a photoshoot today, can someone critique me?

Take it easy im still a newbie.

Working a lot on composition. Again, take it easy on me, I know theyre not perfect shots but just hoping someone can tell me some positives.

Used bounce flash on the above image ^.

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