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******Minichallenge 357: Dissonant Composition*********

Started Feb 17, 2013 | Discussions thread
f3nr15
f3nr15 Forum Member • Posts: 55
Re: Coexist

dave vichich wrote:

Ha, I feel like a proud papa.

Your daughter's eyes are fantastic. I can see why you like that shot so much.

The more you do, the easier it becomes.

This is the one nit I have with the image. Without you telling us that is your daughter's hand, we wouldn't know.

I think you have a great idea here. Maybe try another shot of her more from the side or a 3/4 view so the viewer can see her face while drawing.

Or maybe even something like this: LINK

Thanks Dave, was hoping you would chime in!

I see your point about the hand being anonymous - I was hoping that the colourful character of the pencil would tell the story of the child's hand, but it hasn't worked out that way.

Actually, I quite liked the funny composition in your link - it got me thinking that I perhaps could have done an over-the-head composition like I did with my Attunement photo for the Music minichallenge -



Attunement

I'll think a little more about the composure next time.

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