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******Minichallenge 357: Dissonant Composition*********

Started Feb 17, 2013 | Discussions thread
WilbaW
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Re: Coexist
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Congrats on what you've done. I agree with Dave, I would never guess that the hand belongs to the subject - it's too dark-skinned and adult-looking for me to make the connection. That's not a problem, just saying they don't look congruous.

One thing I'd do differently is bring the hand closer, so that the tip of the pencil is poised over the edge of the hair, to make it look like we are witnessing the image being drawn. As it is, they don't look connected to me. Maybe even take a bit off the shadow under the pencil so it looks like it's touching the paper. If you did that you could include more of the hand as well...

And thanks for scoring one for the lefties. 

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